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Tuesday, April 19, 2011

An Agent In 25 Words Or Less: aka ANOTHER SUCCESS STORY

It's true!  Another agent-client pairing has happened as a direct result of MSFV; this time, with a 25-word crit and a lurking agent.

Read Joshua McCune's story:

Back in March 2010, Authoress ran a first 25 words contest... I'd already looped through a couple of openings for my manuscript, but finally settled on one I liked and submitted. Posted the first couple of paragraphs on my blog, then a couple hours later saw this email in my inbox from agent Ammi-Joan Paquette. From what I knew of her, she seemed awesome. Unfortunately, she didn't accept unsolicited submissions. She really liked my opening and wondered where I was in the manuscript. Um, that would be cloud 9 and about 60,000 words to go. Query me when ready. My lucky day :)

By October, I'd finally wrapped up the story and tentatively sent it to her. Joan responded a couple of days later with something along the lines of 'gripping stuff. Can we chat?' Up to cloud 10. When we spoke, she mentioned what she liked... and what she didn't. What she didn't happened to be in line w/ my worry zones, so I was more than happy to do a requested revision.

So, over the next few months, I went into the outer orbits of blogdom, rewrote the last half of the book in a far different direction... somewhat out of my comfort zone, but more streamlined (though darker, and it was already darkish to begin with). Joan let me know she was backed up, so it might be a while. Okay, I can handle waiting (not necessarily calmly, of course). Almost two months pass; I get an email Apr 1 along the lines of 'halfway through. Loving this. Will be in touch soon.' Okay...yeah. Joan, for anybody who knows her, is a sweetheart, and not someone prone to such jokes, yet it was Apr. 1...

But I was comforted. I'd made a few changes to first half of book, but it was still in similar form. It was the second half where I'd done most of the rework--and the worrying.

Three days later (me doing mental gymnastics in my head about time ramifications), she emails me: 'This is absolutely terrific. Can we talk?' Whoa! (Joey Lawrence style) A few days after, we talked (well, she did, I kind of blabbered), she offered, I accepted (my b-day was a week later...best present ever). And then she told me that her agency was having its annual retreat (how cool is that?) in a few days. Just happened to be in Austin, TX this year, which happens to be about an hour north of where I live in San Antonio... Could I come up and meet her?

Joan was a spark of enthusiasm from the get go who pushed me to be better. IRL, she was even more awesome.

Ultimately, it's nice when one of your friends, family members, etc. tells you, 'it's good,' but what do they know besides love and support? Having someone who started off a stranger showing such enthusiasm... someone who's a professional (both an author and an agent). It's like mainlining sunshine.

Yeah, it's the first step past the gate or up the stairwell, but I couldn't imagine having someone better than Joan to guide me.

Thanks, Authoress, for allowing me twenty-five words, for giving me the opportunity. Can't be said enough how awesome you are for what you do for the writing community.

28 comments:

  1. WOW Congratulations!! What an awesome story and thanks so much for sharing!

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  2. That's an amazing story! Congratulations!

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  3. What a fantastic story! Congrats to you both!

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  4. This is very cool :3 Huge congrats to both Joan and Joshua!

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  5. Success stories are the best! Congrats Authoress, Joan and Joshua.

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  6. VERY cool story and so glad you shared. I want to read Joshua's 25 words--the start of it all!

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  7. Wow, that is an encouraging story. Congratulations!

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  8. Thanks for sharing your story - it helps to hear of other's success. Congrats!!

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  9. "It's like mainlining sunshine". Love this!

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  10. That's wonderful! I'm so happy for you. Hope this is the first of many successes to come. :-)

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  11. Yay, Joshua! I've been a client of Joan's for two years and she's the best! (Although, you're ahead of me in terms of meeting her IRL!)

    Jeanne Ryan

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  12. I agree one hundred percent. It is awesome what you do for writers out here. Congratulations, Joshua and the best for your writing career :)

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  13. Congrats, Joshua! She's my crit partner's agent and sounds fabulous. It's wonderful of Authoress to provide these opportunities...it's like Match.com for agents/writers. :)

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  14. So many success stories recently! Squee! I love that this was from a lurking agent too, so very exciting for you!

    ~Ailsa

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  15. Such a great story! Congratulations to Joshua, Ms. Paquette, and Authoress Anon for bringing it together!

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  16. Oh that's just made my day. Congratulations to you both and well done Authoress for another happy couple :)

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  17. Thanks, everyone, for the well wishes. Mad props to Authoress. And big congrats to Jeanne on NERVE, which sounds totally awesome.

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  18. Congratulations! I had wondered why you had disappeared off the blogosphere and I wondered if you were still even writing. You were! I'm so happy for you. Throwing lots of celebratory confetti!

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  19. Wow, congratulations Joshua/Bane! I'll have to go back and check out the first 25 words that caught Ms Paquette's eye.

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  20. Yet another wonderful success story and from a lurking agent :D Congrats to you, Joshua.

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  21. supercool! Congrats to you, Joshua. That makes you #10~ (signed, #9 ;o) <3

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  22. You're very lucky to have landed her. From what I hear, just a little bit of wonderful she is.
    Well done. What a fantastic success story!

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  23. What a great story! Thanks for sharing! I met Joan at a conference and thought she was amazing.

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