Tuesday, April 2, 2013

FAKE LOGLINE #38

TITLE: Authoress the Rescuer
GENRE: Action/Adventure

Calm and collected Authoress needs to save authors' work from the evil and calculating Bot. It snatches up entries, swallowing them deep into the confines of cyberspace. The Authoress must rescue entries in time for the big reveal to the angelic Secret Agent.

17 comments:

  1. No.
    (Wish I was allowed to vote maybe.)

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  2. No, although I'm with birdinabowler. It's more of a maybe than a no. What happens if the entries aren't rescued?

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  3. No- close but awkward.

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  4. Yes. It's a bit flat, but it's also concise and clear.

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  5. Yes, haha, because it has to do with the actual stuff that goes on, and it's funny! If you up'ed the stakes a bit...

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  6. Yes. It needs more pizzazz but it´s clear and it´s tight and it´s what a logline should be.

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  7. No. The stakes need to be higher.

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  8. No. It's not a big enough problem for a novel.

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