Tuesday, April 2, 2013

FAKE LOGLINE #39

TITLE: The Anonymous Comment
GENRE: Adventure

After uncovering missives in her spam comments, Authoress is thrust into a hunt across the blogosphere for a mysterious commenter with a NYC House publishing deal up their sleeves. But is correct use of you’re and your, avoidance of passive sentences, and Mr. A, her tight-wearing sidekick, enough for Authoress to circumnavigate comment forums, misplaced modifiers, and the dreaded WordPress?

17 comments:

  1. No. There are very cute elements here but as a whole it doesn't work as a logline.

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  2. No.

    I don't dislike this one, but I just feel like there are a lot of these loglines with exactly the same "plot"!

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  3. No. The second line is too confusing.

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  4. No. I love a lot about this, but there's just too much going on for me.

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  5. Yes. You won my vote with "Mr. A, her tight-wearing sidekick." So funny!

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  6. No, I don't get the stakes. Sorry = (

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  7. No. it´s cute but it needs more work for it be a story.

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  8. Yes..come on guys, this is great.

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