Tuesday, April 2, 2013

FAKE LOGLINE #44

TITLE: Steamy Hot
GENRE: Steampunk Romantic Comedy

Against the wishes of her Victorian family, Authoress constructs a coterie of clockwork minions to assist in her grand plan of opening a love-match steamnetwork. But a business rival kidnaps her silent partner (and secret love) Mr. A in a bid to shut down her now-thriving business. Can Authoress and her clockwork minions rescue Mr. A before it’s too late?

18 comments:

  1. Yes. I was on the fence about "before it's too late?" ending. But the cozy mystery/steam punk angle won me over.

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  2. No, but I liked the bit about Mr.A

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  3. No. This one's really close for me, though.

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  4. Yes. Love the genre, too.

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  5. No...I felt like there needed to be more stuff to do with writing, or with something blog-ish. I don't think I'd read about a love-match steamnetwork. But I loved the Mr. A mention!!!

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  6. No. Cute and funny, but i think it needs more work on focusing on the story.

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