TITLE: Bear Guard
GENRE: Adult Fantasy
On the vast Northern Border, where the Bear Empire touches the kingdom of spirit beings, five outcast soldiers are thrown together by the machinations of a calculating Empress. But when they stumble upon a plot that stretches across borders and over a decade, they realize they may have a chance to prevent a war that could ravage the continent. Trying to stop it, though, may cost them their friendships, their sanity, and their very lives.
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ReplyDeleteThis is great! Succinct but intriguing, with just enough information to keep us wanting more. You might be able to combine the last two sentences to streamline it a little more -- something like "...prevent a war that could ravage the continent, though doing so may cost them their friendships, their sanity, and their very lives."
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like you have a vast, perhaps epic fantasy with multiple main characters. To make it more eye-catching, you might name one of the main characters and say what stakes he or she has in this.
ReplyDeleteInteresting premise! Is it possible to be a bit more specific about the stakes? For example, "madness leading someone to kill their own friends" is always a bit more interesting than just "madness." Insert in whatever type of madness you meant.
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