Wednesday, July 3, 2019

Pitch for the Win: The Critiques!

Dearest writerly ones!

Pull out your notebook and pen; today you get to sit back and read the thoughtful (and in some cases, quite detailed) critiques of our winning first pages. While it's true that all critique is subjective, it's also true that reading what experienced writers have to say ups our game, giving us things to think about that we can keep in mind when doing our own writing.

Enjoy! And one more huge thank you to our participating authors.
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8 comments:

  1. LaurelJuly 3, 2019 at 2:14 PM

    Thank you so much for setting this up. The advice from the other authors has been insightful to my own work even.

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    1. AuthoressJuly 3, 2019 at 2:19 PM

      You're welcome! And that's the beauty of it. We can glean so much from the critique of others's work!

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  2. SusanJuly 4, 2019 at 11:26 AM

    Thank you so much, Jillian and thank you Erin, for your detailed critique of my work. I've already made changes to my ms and it reads so much better because of your suggestions.

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    1. AuthoressJuly 4, 2019 at 12:54 PM

      You're welcome, Susan, and I'm SO glad to hear how helpful Erin's critique has been! :)

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  3. DJJuly 5, 2019 at 2:03 PM

    Thank you, participating authors and Authoress- reading these critiques has been very interesting! And thank you, contest winners, for putting your writing out there for the rest of us to read and learn from!

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