tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post172090921610867309..comments2024-03-29T05:54:33.136-04:00Comments on Authoress: Drop The Needle 14Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-1209414244520058522008-07-31T23:55:00.000-04:002008-07-31T23:55:00.000-04:00Jakar is not someone I'd care to mess with. Nice ...Jakar is not someone I'd care to mess with. Nice job with him.<BR/><BR/>KizmetAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-401451087953286152008-07-31T14:39:00.000-04:002008-07-31T14:39:00.000-04:00Jakar is the SC here, but I want to know more abou...Jakar is the SC here, but I want to know more about who "she" is. I also thought your MC was a girl for a few minutes, I don't know why...<BR/><BR/>Jakar seemed to be in a love triangle with the mysterious "she" and his actions and dialog toward the MC was perfectly fitting for two men fighting for the attentions of "her."<BR/><BR/>Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-13995107814935683352008-07-31T14:29:00.000-04:002008-07-31T14:29:00.000-04:00Jakar is really rough around the edges. Kind of ma...Jakar is really rough around the edges. Kind of manipulative. I like it!Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16497180479949061660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-87317420340684412212008-07-31T13:34:00.000-04:002008-07-31T13:34:00.000-04:00Yup. Jakar is working well here. Good job!Yup. Jakar is working well here. Good job!H. L. Dyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11054946734073372817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-9358286020885008112008-07-30T17:33:00.000-04:002008-07-30T17:33:00.000-04:00Ah! I recognise this story but I haven't got this ...Ah! I recognise this story but I haven't got this far. Rats! Plot point spoiled.<BR/><BR/>But on the subject, I've always disliked Jakar and this just makes me hate him more. He's just so superior!Esther.Jadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11552124058522436295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-89072533415923283342008-07-30T15:20:00.000-04:002008-07-30T15:20:00.000-04:00Jakar seems like the SC here. Without knowing more...Jakar seems like the SC here. Without knowing more about the situation, I'm a little unsure about the back and forth of who the unnamed woman likes. Within the scene, Jakar comes across as tough and insidious.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-23145583499972282892008-07-30T15:03:00.000-04:002008-07-30T15:03:00.000-04:00This was AWESOME! Great tension, a painful irony,...This was AWESOME! Great tension, a painful irony, and both characters were depicted amazingly vividly. I would definitely want to read more about both characters!LoriStronginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10764202539292045963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-4127389155386671982008-07-30T14:22:00.000-04:002008-07-30T14:22:00.000-04:00Jakar certainly sounds like a jolly gun-toting thi...Jakar certainly sounds like a jolly gun-toting thing doesn't he... <BR/><BR/>*squints at him laughing, twinkling, and grinning* It conflicts a little bit with his tensing arm and words in spots...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45935678903590628712008-07-30T14:15:00.000-04:002008-07-30T14:15:00.000-04:00Good job. I see Jakar as a tough guy (wanna be, an...Good job. I see Jakar as a tough guy (wanna be, anyway): ready to use the gun, pulls the paper out wiht his teeth. I might be wrong, but i'm also sensing some jealousy in relation to your MC. Not sure if MC is man or woman, tho.queenofmeanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16488271353775981931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-31098625280125893562008-07-30T13:07:00.000-04:002008-07-30T13:07:00.000-04:00Hey -- I recognize these characters! It's nice to ...Hey -- I recognize these characters! It's nice to see Jakar being so thoroughly evil. He's very engaging here, what with the chuckling and the menacing and the teeth-grabbing and the gun-wielding and all. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-33985979519312505622008-07-30T13:02:00.000-04:002008-07-30T13:02:00.000-04:00Jakar looks like an interesting character. He's a ...Jakar looks like an interesting character. He's a bit rough, but also a bit manipulative. Likes to be in charge. Very well done.Luc2https://www.blogger.com/profile/01069557738924277313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-7893787843514825882008-07-30T12:44:00.000-04:002008-07-30T12:44:00.000-04:00Jakar worked for me too. He seemed rugged and hard...Jakar worked for me too. He seemed rugged and hardened. The plot seems interesting as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-49975717857330165252008-07-30T12:26:00.000-04:002008-07-30T12:26:00.000-04:00Jakar worked for me. But the real compelling chara...Jakar worked for me. But the real compelling character in all of this is the unnamed "she" - sounds fascinating.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-1947033917072575272008-07-30T11:36:00.000-04:002008-07-30T11:36:00.000-04:00I think the secondary character is Jakar, and he s...I think the secondary character is Jakar, and he sounds like a pirate to me! Quite rough around the edges (personality - he uses his teeth!) Real for me.Nayuleskahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08693548526829437580noreply@blogger.com