tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post2103545828393020002..comments2024-03-28T08:14:28.881-04:00Comments on Authoress: January Secret Agent #16Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-80248824794167715092013-01-20T15:13:49.628-05:002013-01-20T15:13:49.628-05:00I’m hooked! Great writing, great setting, great v...I’m hooked! Great writing, great setting, great voice Greek mythology fantasies can be tough because there’s so much out there, but this one may just stand out. Secret Agentnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-12091665054015108452013-01-18T05:00:41.253-05:002013-01-18T05:00:41.253-05:00Great setup! It holds so much promise, and it'...Great setup! It holds so much promise, and it's well written. Love the technology aspect. I'd definitely read more.Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15769803733067838372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-54348055666738729572013-01-17T20:06:45.236-05:002013-01-17T20:06:45.236-05:00This is intriguing. I like that there's alread...This is intriguing. I like that there's already conflict and I'm really interested to find out what happens on the Procession Day. Oh, and I love the title, too.Jenilyn Collingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13166139358513659892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-41704462030925899932013-01-17T07:02:29.457-05:002013-01-17T07:02:29.457-05:00I, too, tripped a little on the first few paras, a...I, too, tripped a little on the first few paras, as I realised that Nuri was not the love god and the god was actually a statue. <br /><br />Otherwise, i'm interested to find out who Isidora is...obviously important if she has scrolls of papyrus delivered to her. And nerdy enough to not care about clothing or the glory of the love goddess, but instead to wonder at developments in technology. My kind of heroine!Jo-Ann Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18027989147411624378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-2832647638996405322013-01-17T00:43:05.583-05:002013-01-17T00:43:05.583-05:00I really like the title. I wasn't hooked by th...I really like the title. I wasn't hooked by the first line, it gave me a little trouble to figure out what was happening. For me, it seemed like I missed something. But, I agree with the others that the writing is strong. Some great description is shown here in a way that adds to the characters. I can visualize this so easily. Nice work.Stephscohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06328839483008086049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-2858855030077249662013-01-16T22:31:06.206-05:002013-01-16T22:31:06.206-05:00Love. This sucked me right in.Love. This sucked me right in.Just Another YA Authornoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-69190438345455314282013-01-16T16:32:08.627-05:002013-01-16T16:32:08.627-05:00Love this! Such a fiesty beginning for the setting...Love this! Such a fiesty beginning for the setting! I like the promises made in this. I can see a lot of conflict arising already. Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-91914629330634079472013-01-16T15:29:56.540-05:002013-01-16T15:29:56.540-05:00I like Isadora already. She's smart and she do...I like Isadora already. She's smart and she doesn't simply believe in tradition. I imagine she'll be rocking this Greek boat quite a bit. I would read more. Nice job.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09462486350293703991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-70828441350686571512013-01-16T14:32:23.696-05:002013-01-16T14:32:23.696-05:00I like this too! The MC is appealing. :)I like this too! The MC is appealing. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-35728631328046839402013-01-16T13:45:30.323-05:002013-01-16T13:45:30.323-05:00Lovely writing that flows well. I like that Isidor...Lovely writing that flows well. I like that Isidora is her own person and that she's more interested in all the new technology than some sort of religious procession.<br /><br />I would keep reading!Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17244475646807937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-48930058990975459732013-01-16T11:29:14.715-05:002013-01-16T11:29:14.715-05:00I'm immediately drawn to this character and LO...I'm immediately drawn to this character and LOVE this setting. So unique. And beautiful writing too. I wanna know what's on those scrolls. :)ilimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17899071063752311737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-32677035103791283762013-01-16T11:17:20.831-05:002013-01-16T11:17:20.831-05:00Isidora seems like a fiery MC. And I like a book-s...Isidora seems like a fiery MC. And I like a book-smart heroine! <br /><br />Well done dialogue. I want to read on to find out what "Procession Day" entails.Emily R. 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