tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post2868525646995804522..comments2024-03-29T05:54:33.136-04:00Comments on Authoress: 10TH BIRTHDAY BLOGPITCH #50: YA ThrillerAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-69515751377157400592018-07-10T23:37:10.615-04:002018-07-10T23:37:10.615-04:00Very nice post really ! I apperciate your blog Tha...Very nice post really ! I apperciate your blog Thanks for sharing,keep sharing more blogs.<br /><br /><a href="http://5-belivethaipeople.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ดูหนัง</a>vaiyborahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05095754542895387700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-25021495107219472272018-03-31T18:57:26.810-04:002018-03-31T18:57:26.810-04:00Thanks for the feedback, everyone! Thanks for the feedback, everyone! Michele Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08152126207883635685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-70788205705391656902018-03-30T16:38:19.590-04:002018-03-30T16:38:19.590-04:00I absolutely love this concept.
It's like the ...I absolutely love this concept.<br />It's like the Bff concept but with traits of single white female.<br />Would love to see exactly what happens.<br />Good luck!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05177686842708250289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-23413472633985953782018-03-30T14:51:05.068-04:002018-03-30T14:51:05.068-04:00This is so cool! Please send your query and first ...This is so cool! Please send your query and first 50 pages with the subject line "Requested Materials" to querydanielle@nelsonagency.com. I can't wait to take a look!Danielle Burbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07946749932935204847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-32520817332921297812018-03-30T14:10:24.491-04:002018-03-30T14:10:24.491-04:00I'm a little thrown by "and finds out the...I'm a little thrown by "and finds out the hard way that things on the internet live forever." Does this happen before Jane takes on a life of her own (and if so, how has she come to the end of forever before this even starts?) Maybe you need to reword to something more exact.<br /><br />Aside from that, I'd like to know more about how Jane knows her secrets. Does she have access to her hard drive or her memories or her Facebook messages or something?<br /><br />Good luck!<br />HollyHolly Bodgerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08218140291198124199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-16754925497578358762018-03-30T12:04:08.214-04:002018-03-30T12:04:08.214-04:00Great premise! Congrats on the requests!
Great premise! Congrats on the requests!<br />Loretta Chefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14614456326479128984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-19323643560636790642018-03-29T19:58:39.117-04:002018-03-29T19:58:39.117-04:00Sounds awesome! Please send the query letter and m...Sounds awesome! Please send the query letter and manuscript to queries@ldlainc.com. And include Birthday Blog Pitch in the subject line. Thanks!Tamar Rydzinskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10257464963703099847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45155185343343339222018-03-29T17:37:16.733-04:002018-03-29T17:37:16.733-04:00Intriguing. Please email your query + 3 chapters +...Intriguing. Please email your query + 3 chapters + synopsis to lauren@triadaus.com, and include "Birthday Blog Pitch" in the subj line. I look forward to reading!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17277435872061050126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-37956540222452201642018-03-29T15:24:50.034-04:002018-03-29T15:24:50.034-04:00Love it! Definitely grabbed my attention. I think ...Love it! Definitely grabbed my attention. I think those comp titles would garner a lot of interest. amandawritesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-53564160868292500362018-03-29T14:55:23.394-04:002018-03-29T14:55:23.394-04:00Could you send query and first ten pages to info@t...Could you send query and first ten pages to info@thebentagency.com. Thanks!<br />Jenny Bent<br />The Bent Agency Jennybenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11699301154578890097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-78083853614206749332018-03-29T13:35:15.231-04:002018-03-29T13:35:15.231-04:00Oh this sounds really cool! I’d love to see the fi...Oh this sounds really cool! I’d love to see the first 50 pages + a synopsis. You can upload everything via QueryManager: QueryMe.online/1005/ABBlogpitch<br /><br />Moe Ferrara<br />BookEnds LiteraryMoe Ferraranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-64229117494824277842018-03-29T13:27:06.024-04:002018-03-29T13:27:06.024-04:00Really, really good! The very end of the last line...Really, really good! The very end of the last line didn't read as well as the rest, but as someone said just changing the "she" to "Jane" might help there. First sentence hooked me.Petehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13033830756434950869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-29823120861451645372018-03-29T12:06:56.810-04:002018-03-29T12:06:56.810-04:00I love this! No advice on improvements, I think it...I love this! No advice on improvements, I think it's great.Katiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02338521848162456432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-65579548983280055232018-03-29T12:04:23.464-04:002018-03-29T12:04:23.464-04:00Ooo, nice!Ooo, nice!H. R. Sinclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06715450637785127208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-26782862811606294742018-03-29T11:48:51.026-04:002018-03-29T11:48:51.026-04:00Hello,
Can you please send me your query and the f...Hello,<br />Can you please send me your query and the first 100 pages to my email below?<br />Thanks!<br />Carrie Hannigan<br />HSG Agency<br />channigan@hsgagency.com<br />Carrie Hannigannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-29851463626138955172018-03-29T11:39:35.025-04:002018-03-29T11:39:35.025-04:00This sounds really cool. My favorite line- things ...This sounds really cool. My favorite line- things on the internet live forever. The possibilities here seem endless. Good luck!Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15769803733067838372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-1281780007625078222018-03-29T11:29:26.691-04:002018-03-29T11:29:26.691-04:00Love the sound of this! Please send your query + f...Love the sound of this! Please send your query + first 3 chapters my way to consider further :) Ammi-Joan Paquettenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-74332665873460038082018-03-29T11:26:05.850-04:002018-03-29T11:26:05.850-04:00Completely hooked! I particularly love the line &q...Completely hooked! I particularly love the line "finds out the hard way that things on the internet live forever." Very creepy and foreboding! No critiques from me.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16651851706186463400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44044909185021406992018-03-29T11:17:39.071-04:002018-03-29T11:17:39.071-04:00I'd love to see a synopsis and the first 50 pa...I'd love to see a synopsis and the first 50 pages. Jordyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16573154547132863157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-23299436823590703042018-03-29T11:10:33.877-04:002018-03-29T11:10:33.877-04:00Sounds intriguing! I'd love to the first 50 p...Sounds intriguing! I'd love to the first 50 pages of this.Caryn Wisemannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-21235854948022102832018-03-29T11:07:22.848-04:002018-03-29T11:07:22.848-04:00Hi! Well I'm certainly intrigued! One suggesti...Hi! Well I'm certainly intrigued! One suggestion would be at the end "she reveals an even darker truth"- maybe switch the "she" to Jane? That would keep the pronouns super clear. <br /><br />Also, I'm curious if the implications of the horrible accidents are also true? Or are those fake set ups, but Fin also does really have a dark secret?<br /><br />This a little bit hints at some sort of Gossip Girl, all-seeing internet persona vibe too, and I'm digging it.lorrnoreply@blogger.com