tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post3855038207925929054..comments2024-03-29T03:41:44.480-04:00Comments on Authoress: Name That Genre #19Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-53782948806714659162015-04-12T15:28:37.349-04:002015-04-12T15:28:37.349-04:00Something, perhaps a ghost in the machine, caused ...Something, perhaps a ghost in the machine, caused my comments on other entries to repeat and repeat and repeat. Maybe I have an typing stutter! Anyway - sorry about that! Thanks again for all of the input and thank you, Authoress, for this opportunity! It was lovely!cindy norrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097979213743065308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-65944183249008049582015-04-11T23:51:50.856-04:002015-04-11T23:51:50.856-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.cindy norrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097979213743065308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-9273755987731096432015-04-11T23:51:15.602-04:002015-04-11T23:51:15.602-04:00Thank you! I'll take a look at it again.Thank you! I'll take a look at it again. cindy norrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097979213743065308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-62267389756351313602015-04-11T09:09:15.716-04:002015-04-11T09:09:15.716-04:00The story is a Middle Grade FANTASY! My gratitude...The story is a Middle Grade FANTASY! My gratitude to those who shared thoughts and ideas. They are all quite beneficial and helpful. The Shanofen, whose character recurs throughout the story, leads us to the main character in the next paragraph. She throws a book at the bird (missing him) when he sits in her window, telling her to wake up. Thank you all again!cindy norrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097979213743065308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-76380374005834657062015-04-10T23:11:50.607-04:002015-04-10T23:11:50.607-04:00Fantasy
because in the bird's POVFantasy<br /><br />because in the bird's POVAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-15629147017330823842015-04-10T20:23:37.169-04:002015-04-10T20:23:37.169-04:00Fantasy.
Bird type creature who thinks like human...Fantasy.<br /><br />Bird type creature who thinks like humans.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-50799624029211656212015-04-10T18:36:24.235-04:002015-04-10T18:36:24.235-04:00Fantasy. Alternative POV. Fantasy. Alternative POV. C. R. Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04627499155109943973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-219188888503982162015-04-10T16:43:23.726-04:002015-04-10T16:43:23.726-04:00Fantasy. Fantasy. sbjameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06986950185596914217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-22179725439722784642015-04-10T13:14:38.339-04:002015-04-10T13:14:38.339-04:00Historical Fantasy. "Villagers" preparin...Historical Fantasy. "Villagers" preparing for a celebration makes me think it's historical.Ginanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-80229400199683388712015-04-10T12:05:47.483-04:002015-04-10T12:05:47.483-04:00Fantasy
Your prose is pretty - the Shanofen sounds...Fantasy<br />Your prose is pretty - the Shanofen sounds lovely!<br />For whatever it's worth, I had to work pretty hard to imagine the bird's flight path in those first few sentences -- I wonder if you can simplify his actions, perhaps less of a list of movements? He's about to divebomb, right? Although that's not as elegant a word as the bird suggests. :)<br />At any rate, I had a hard time staying connected through all that.<br />Good luck!'<br />Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18403083766515156655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-29325945990998449992015-04-10T10:22:00.809-04:002015-04-10T10:22:00.809-04:00Animal Fantasy.
M.C. is a bird.Animal Fantasy.<br /><br />M.C. is a bird.shelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14389179701574555688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-52559741092964770842015-04-10T10:05:35.943-04:002015-04-10T10:05:35.943-04:00Fantasy
Because of the bird MC. Fantasy<br /><br />Because of the bird MC. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06133613633729435045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-33599640857803217652015-04-10T00:08:41.500-04:002015-04-10T00:08:41.500-04:00Fantasy. Fantasy. Ricknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-43343580068731297662015-04-09T22:56:54.780-04:002015-04-09T22:56:54.780-04:00Fantasy
Narrator is clearly not humanFantasy<br /><br />Narrator is clearly not humanTracy Goldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07499597179225828986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45957518649472564212015-04-09T21:34:25.415-04:002015-04-09T21:34:25.415-04:00Fantasy.
The anthropomorphic aspect and that the b...Fantasy.<br />The anthropomorphic aspect and that the bird thinks of itself as protector of the village. It must be big. Shanofen is an intriguing word.JAZhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187794911674829043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-3921141839408591852015-04-09T20:45:51.131-04:002015-04-09T20:45:51.131-04:00FANTASY, sub-genre mythical. FANTASY, sub-genre mythical. Sussuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10060179011416062341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-76463668005514768032015-04-09T17:24:23.235-04:002015-04-09T17:24:23.235-04:00Fantasy
The introduction of the mythical creature ...Fantasy<br />The introduction of the mythical creature that looks over the village.Bonnie Staringhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15617661715759556106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-48571133759188856502015-04-09T17:13:10.197-04:002015-04-09T17:13:10.197-04:00High Fantasy
the mention of the shanofen creature...High Fantasy<br /><br />the mention of the shanofen creature and hamlet.Eisenman Softwarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03846829150145907405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-4091712851210629392015-04-09T16:56:02.848-04:002015-04-09T16:56:02.848-04:00Fantasy
The names and the bird (I thought it was ...Fantasy<br /><br />The names and the bird (I thought it was a dragon at first) gives this a fantasy feel.Kathleeahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087009456072956020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-85538856689460627022015-04-09T16:44:00.949-04:002015-04-09T16:44:00.949-04:00Fantasy, as the Shanofen bird appears to be a godl...Fantasy, as the Shanofen bird appears to be a godlet or some such, protecting the village.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01488697356459881105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-40901847943674972392015-04-09T16:43:55.732-04:002015-04-09T16:43:55.732-04:00Fantasy, as the Shanofen bird appears to be a godl...Fantasy, as the Shanofen bird appears to be a godlet or some such, protecting the village.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01488697356459881105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-16434420301047720662015-04-09T16:10:45.644-04:002015-04-09T16:10:45.644-04:00Fantasy
Distant 3rd POV of a large bird who loves...Fantasy<br /><br />Distant 3rd POV of a large bird who loves a village suggests this is a prologue for a fantasy.Lanettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09987748870291077638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-21325399407592886422015-04-09T14:41:31.987-04:002015-04-09T14:41:31.987-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Rocket Ma'amhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18048400855966871949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-25197961464178166282015-04-09T14:41:28.649-04:002015-04-09T14:41:28.649-04:00Fantasy. Not sure if this creature is half-human o...Fantasy. Not sure if this creature is half-human or not.Rocket Ma'amhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18048400855966871949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-1290943303144601622015-04-09T14:37:43.257-04:002015-04-09T14:37:43.257-04:00Fantasy
The thinking bird/man and made up words. ...Fantasy<br /><br />The thinking bird/man and made up words. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11616443977651188748noreply@blogger.com