tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post386968045911178578..comments2024-03-28T02:12:56.114-04:00Comments on Authoress: 25 Words #18Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-18862555573668485532020-09-24T08:57:34.365-04:002020-09-24T08:57:34.365-04:00nice!
viagra bekasi
alat bantu seks jakarta
hammer...nice!<br /><a href="https://twitter.com/CodPil" rel="nofollow">viagra bekasi</a><br /><a href="https://alatbantupasutri.business.site/" rel="nofollow">alat bantu seks jakarta</a><br /><a href="https://toko-joshi-ang-cod-bekasi-jakarta.business.site/" rel="nofollow">hammer of thor asli bekasi</a><br /><a href="https://viagracodbekasi.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow">viagra cod bekasi</a><br /><a href="https://jualviagracodbekasi.webflow.io/" rel="nofollow">jual viagra cod bekasi</a><br /><a href="https://web.facebook.com/Hammer-Of-Thor-Italy-Asli-COD-Bekasi-0853-1201-0145-115724873605608/" rel="nofollow">hammer of thor cod bekasi</a><br /><a href="https://web.facebook.com/Obat-Kuat-Viagra-Asli-100mg-COD-Bekasi-0853-1201-0145-116722930163695/" rel="nofollow">viagra asli cod bekasi</a><br /><a href="https://web.facebook.com/obatperangsangcodbekasi/" rel="nofollow">obat perangsang bekasi</a><br /><a href="https://web.facebook.com/Alat-Bantu-Sex-Pria-Wanita-COD-Bekasi-0853-1201-0145-117086626804945/" rel="nofollow">alat bantu sex bekasi</a><br />viviene joelihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06354314535305223341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-8418010368188704332010-06-23T00:54:44.672-04:002010-06-23T00:54:44.672-04:00Interesting...I'd drop the university after Co...Interesting...I'd drop the university after Columbia.Sharon K. Mayhewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07799235347319851345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-91727687309847285562010-06-23T00:15:10.776-04:002010-06-23T00:15:10.776-04:00Intriguing. I want to know what a sticky brain is....Intriguing. I want to know what a sticky brain is. I also like the title--but I agree with Vincent ; I hope it's alluding to Jane Eyre, and not a mashup.Ruth Donnellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12305109099610123918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44792638591793762002010-06-22T17:04:50.627-04:002010-06-22T17:04:50.627-04:00I like the title. The 'or else' was distr...I like the title. The 'or else' was distracting to me. I wanted to know 'or else what?' But you didn't go there. You went on to the sticky brain, which is also intriguing and probably more relevant to the plot. Perhaps cut the 'or else' for now and bring it up later?Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15769803733067838372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44449538913618196922010-06-22T15:49:38.494-04:002010-06-22T15:49:38.494-04:00I LOVE the title. I also like the voice and would ...I LOVE the title. I also like the voice and would definitely keep reading.H. Grantnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-6436278825404327502010-06-22T13:47:39.886-04:002010-06-22T13:47:39.886-04:00THis is a little awkward for me. I would rework th...THis is a little awkward for me. I would rework the sentence, maybe break it up?Kathryn Packer Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16506942804607936833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-70691797214528556152010-06-22T12:24:02.389-04:002010-06-22T12:24:02.389-04:00I have no idea what a 'sticky brain' is bu...I have no idea what a 'sticky brain' is but I love it!<br /><br />If your story is going to parallel Jane Eyre then I feel you may lose me quickly. But if your whole story keeps this voice, I may stick around a little longer.Vincent Kalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04625863843215035035noreply@blogger.com