tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post4139282408352259269..comments2024-03-29T05:54:33.136-04:00Comments on Authoress: 135 YA SFFAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-52599283769278053822010-03-27T21:27:39.595-04:002010-03-27T21:27:39.595-04:00Too much telling to really grab me.Too much telling to really grab me.Cheryl Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-6848913525188323082010-03-26T16:20:02.208-04:002010-03-26T16:20:02.208-04:00Boring...Boring...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03884912115599229843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-31627077535662774822010-03-26T16:12:19.142-04:002010-03-26T16:12:19.142-04:00Not hooked, sorry.Not hooked, sorry.Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-36881753690294505562010-03-26T08:19:27.454-04:002010-03-26T08:19:27.454-04:00The meow feels unrelated to the shield, and then n...The meow feels unrelated to the shield, and then nothing happens but waiting until morning. Not hooked.Vicki Rochohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07381089434014961076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-36118682148226579402010-03-26T06:18:38.556-04:002010-03-26T06:18:38.556-04:00I don't think so. Sorry.I don't think so. Sorry.Jodi Meadowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796496740054225283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-77746070767028831112010-03-26T01:08:55.272-04:002010-03-26T01:08:55.272-04:00I think the wording is confusing. We associate a &...I think the wording is confusing. We associate a "meow" with the sounds cats make, not protective shields, and the information about the guardian seems disjointed -- like it has nothing to do with the shield. Also, the first thing I thought about when you said "relieved in the early morning" was that the guard had to pee, but I know that's not what you meant.A.L. Sonnichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-15489050290166982042010-03-25T17:59:25.719-04:002010-03-25T17:59:25.719-04:00Sorry... I'm not hooked yet. I'm a little ...Sorry... I'm not hooked yet. I'm a little confused at this beginning.Cate Kariaxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01812494549402252779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-48106684556285262802010-03-25T17:49:25.829-04:002010-03-25T17:49:25.829-04:00Confused, not hooked. Agree with what was said abo...Confused, not hooked. Agree with what was said above.WyndyDaynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-83806857002029019362010-03-25T17:06:22.469-04:002010-03-25T17:06:22.469-04:00Weak hook. I'd keep going to find out what was...Weak hook. I'd keep going to find out what was up with the meow and why a house would need guardians.Tamihttp://tamimoore.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45346677478635877952010-03-25T17:01:50.943-04:002010-03-25T17:01:50.943-04:00Not hooked. I feel like I have to think too much t...Not hooked. I feel like I have to think too much to figure out what this is in the very first line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-56518281134277797972010-03-25T16:55:29.002-04:002010-03-25T16:55:29.002-04:00Not hooked. Nothing is happening except a kitty sa...Not hooked. Nothing is happening except a kitty saying meow and a guardian is standing around. Why can't you start with what happens in the early morning? Obviously that's where the story starts.Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-69925562875465288882010-03-25T16:47:41.038-04:002010-03-25T16:47:41.038-04:00Not hooked; too much of simply "setting a sce...Not hooked; too much of simply "setting a scene" without any characters.Stevehttp://kestrelsaerie.usnoreply@blogger.com