tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post4628769168525224296..comments2024-03-28T02:12:56.114-04:00Comments on Authoress: 111 Contemporary YAAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-40636109314662868572010-03-30T07:59:01.612-04:002010-03-30T07:59:01.612-04:00I thought the second part was stronger than the fi...I thought the second part was stronger than the first. I've found important events tend to cluster, so the bit about most people not having their best and worst in a year didn't really ring true for me. But having both within five minutes... that hooked me and made me want to read on for at least a little bit.Bronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13029635239132926178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-19990185725312736802010-03-28T00:50:15.364-04:002010-03-28T00:50:15.364-04:00My first thought as I read the first part of the s...My first thought as I read the first part of the sentence was a sarcastic Oh really? Cuz i know plenty of folks who can claim best and worst in the same year.<br /><br />Not sure this is that strong of an opening even if rewritten tho--Robbinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09370900593361310765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-84886272343981156522010-03-27T22:44:37.052-04:002010-03-27T22:44:37.052-04:00I liked the hook, but thought the first part of th...I liked the hook, but thought the first part of the sentence could have been worded more stronglyCheryl Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-83736455036603734092010-03-26T20:57:21.644-04:002010-03-26T20:57:21.644-04:00Not hooked, sorry.Not hooked, sorry.Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-40316767236677822632010-03-26T15:29:52.294-04:002010-03-26T15:29:52.294-04:00Mostly hooked. Hoping that what follows will star...Mostly hooked. Hoping that what follows will start right in with those five minutes.falconesse@gmail.comhttp://falconesse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-662819881586130892010-03-26T13:58:30.068-04:002010-03-26T13:58:30.068-04:00Hooked!Hooked!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03503322164886391587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-70536423447969872702010-03-26T12:35:25.342-04:002010-03-26T12:35:25.342-04:00I like it and would read on. I'm curious to fi...I like it and would read on. I'm curious to find out what happens next.Susan X Bradleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03933142677328722384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-12683282002468722832010-03-26T06:33:20.353-04:002010-03-26T06:33:20.353-04:00Close. Not for me, I think, but I think it's h...Close. Not for me, I think, but I think it's hooky.Jodi Meadowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796496740054225283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-35516368565937878842010-03-25T21:40:14.135-04:002010-03-25T21:40:14.135-04:00Curious to read more.Curious to read more.mbk3noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-36495599466513591112010-03-25T20:01:07.725-04:002010-03-25T20:01:07.725-04:00I agree with Bethany Elizabeth. I'm really in...I agree with Bethany Elizabeth. I'm really intrigued by the concept, but the wording seems awkward.Janehttp://www.simplemystery.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-59053942851087756302010-03-25T18:18:21.777-04:002010-03-25T18:18:21.777-04:00Well, I liked it, but it's a little sloppy, I ...Well, I liked it, but it's a little sloppy, I guess. Is there another way you could word it? <br />Truth be told, I was hooked by your title - fantastic, I definitely would want to read more.Bethany Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12829932931010851406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-84256078734059338682010-03-25T17:12:06.511-04:002010-03-25T17:12:06.511-04:00Love it. Now I want to read more to find out the b...Love it. Now I want to read more to find out the best and the worst parts!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00953304463413984709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-5251472976303028012010-03-25T17:07:41.851-04:002010-03-25T17:07:41.851-04:00Hooked! The wording might be tripping me up a bit,...Hooked! The wording might be tripping me up a bit, but I can't put my finger on what's bugging me. And the premise is intriguing enough!MHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16748209334943163314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-74879518888936194682010-03-25T16:53:51.718-04:002010-03-25T16:53:51.718-04:00Hooked! :-)Hooked! :-)Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45449309784394248282010-03-25T16:46:11.071-04:002010-03-25T16:46:11.071-04:00Very interesting. I'd read on.Very interesting. I'd read on.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05192888587472646161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-88234704517597048832010-03-25T16:42:28.330-04:002010-03-25T16:42:28.330-04:00Definitely hooked. I want to know which came first...Definitely hooked. I want to know which came first, the best or worst moment? Exciting.Gracie Bea Wintertonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12812103053130702992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-63926736339033541712010-03-25T16:40:22.186-04:002010-03-25T16:40:22.186-04:00I'm hooked, and would read more.I'm hooked, and would read more.WyndyDaynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-83094771915517733422010-03-25T16:36:03.893-04:002010-03-25T16:36:03.893-04:00Yep. I want more. I'm already trying to think ...Yep. I want more. I'm already trying to think what it would be. You hear a loved one is dead - then hear five minutes later it's not true? Hmmm...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-60196804977115345892010-03-25T16:30:49.270-04:002010-03-25T16:30:49.270-04:00NiceNiceJoshua McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17367262185912463258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-85034331460510141412010-03-25T16:30:11.657-04:002010-03-25T16:30:11.657-04:00Total hook. I'm intrigued and hugely want to k...Total hook. I'm intrigued and hugely want to know the details!Tamihttp://tamimoore.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-51246445965246295202010-03-25T16:27:01.604-04:002010-03-25T16:27:01.604-04:00Hooked, though it sounds suspiciously like backsto...Hooked, though it sounds suspiciously like backstory.Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.com