tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post6670006098937559174..comments2024-03-19T03:20:39.801-04:00Comments on Authoress: Talkin' Heads #19Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-75994813322054291722016-10-17T00:48:58.314-04:002016-10-17T00:48:58.314-04:00Hello, I'm here to introduce someone to you al...Hello, I'm here to introduce someone to you all, his name is Dr.Ekpen Temple a spell caster that help me restored my broken relationship, I saw an article on the Internet someone talking about him how he help her in her relationship, today I'm a beneficial of that article, so that is why I'm also talking about how he has helped me so that someone out there that is facing the same challenge can also contact him for help. Here is DR EKPEN TEMPLE contact info: (ekpentemple@gmail.com) or on Whatsapp number 2347050270218.Gloryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11125928389426370946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-37605436649220482782016-09-23T22:30:27.324-04:002016-09-23T22:30:27.324-04:00I'll think about this, too. Both are college s...I'll think about this, too. Both are college students with some pretensions. Thanks.Bonnie McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02797165753986376810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-3059815152362009652016-09-23T22:29:13.047-04:002016-09-23T22:29:13.047-04:00Interesting perspective. I'll think about it. ...Interesting perspective. I'll think about it. Thanks.Bonnie McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02797165753986376810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-7171347900281370052016-09-23T22:28:40.976-04:002016-09-23T22:28:40.976-04:00You hit the nail on the head. Thanks.You hit the nail on the head. Thanks.Bonnie McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02797165753986376810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-27860873199655764892016-09-23T18:32:18.665-04:002016-09-23T18:32:18.665-04:00I don't read this genre either. Each has a def...I don't read this genre either. Each has a defined personality, that's shines through. I'm not sure about "declaimed poetry". It doesn’t sound natural given the speech pattern so far.H. R. Sinclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06715450637785127208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-13590251935798085332016-09-23T11:46:43.477-04:002016-09-23T11:46:43.477-04:00This is not a genre that I read, so I feel very un...This is not a genre that I read, so I feel very unqualified to offer suggestions.<br /><br />I think that taking out "frank groaned" would be good. Just his leaning his head back tells enough.<br /><br />S.D.Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05707682524268581476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44827037991834651002016-09-22T18:48:35.263-04:002016-09-22T18:48:35.263-04:00Okay, here's the thing. I don't know if I&...Okay, here's the thing. I don't know if I'm supposed to, but I absolutely loathe Frank. He is awful. And the fact that Claire thinks he's worth hanging onto makes me think less of her. <br /><br />Of course, at the beginning of the book, that might be the point. She has this flaw to overcome, and we'll get to see her journey to be stronger and more confident. If that's what you were going for, you've succeeded beautifully. The two personalities come through clearly. (Frank snapping his fingers at the waitress is an especially nice, subtle touch.) <br /><br />Thank you for sharing and good luck.amhogganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831363893894165135noreply@blogger.com