tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post6830107576605385164..comments2024-03-18T12:01:18.507-04:00Comments on Authoress: 50 Words #47Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-43069615472380846212010-04-24T06:08:18.235-04:002010-04-24T06:08:18.235-04:00This is the first one that has hooked me (I am rea...This is the first one that has hooked me (I am reading them in backwards order though).Bronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13029635239132926178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-86906421406443120862010-04-23T13:23:03.927-04:002010-04-23T13:23:03.927-04:00I'm hooked...I'm hooked...Sharon K. Mayhewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07799235347319851345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-38071913119751104782010-04-23T01:13:31.061-04:002010-04-23T01:13:31.061-04:00OMG--I just realized this was in present tense. I...OMG--I just realized this was in present tense. It takes some good writing for me to miss that!Clairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09609095934716513347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-73721375714172299852010-04-23T01:12:17.342-04:002010-04-23T01:12:17.342-04:00Hooked! Great set up.Hooked! Great set up.Clairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09609095934716513347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-46008338958882037292010-04-22T23:49:37.949-04:002010-04-22T23:49:37.949-04:00Hooked.
Nice job.Hooked. <br /><br />Nice job.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-63831664870952446422010-04-22T21:18:07.889-04:002010-04-22T21:18:07.889-04:00Clean. Hooked.Clean. Hooked.JPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03697400097845140664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-38852471466790598602010-04-22T19:58:12.890-04:002010-04-22T19:58:12.890-04:00I like this. The second sentence is cleverly word...I like this. The second sentence is cleverly worded, and I really want to know why he's reaching for this gun. Good job.Amanda the Aspiringhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10983953436816551075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44257297532080038702010-04-22T19:00:10.178-04:002010-04-22T19:00:10.178-04:00Hooked. Would definitely read more.Hooked. Would definitely read more.Irishttp://www.irisharper.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-80764503790591180162010-04-22T18:46:02.110-04:002010-04-22T18:46:02.110-04:00I really like this and want to know which option t...I really like this and want to know which option the main character takes - uses the gun on himself or a clientAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-16604864786304796032010-04-22T17:13:04.235-04:002010-04-22T17:13:04.235-04:00Hooked, although there's a disjointedness abou...Hooked, although there's a disjointedness about this that I find troubling. <br /><br />However, the impression that disjointedness gives me is that the main character is mentally a bit unhinged. If that's what you're trying to get across, it works well.jjdebenedictishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16950592240599703771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-64687717081201050172010-04-22T16:34:50.438-04:002010-04-22T16:34:50.438-04:00I'd definitely read on. ^_^I'd definitely read on. ^_^Valhttp://valeriesfantasy.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-9894136674471434452010-04-22T16:33:50.839-04:002010-04-22T16:33:50.839-04:00Hooked. Nice opening.Hooked. Nice opening.Maggie Marrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04423567809178142889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-52927620479493618682010-04-22T16:15:44.473-04:002010-04-22T16:15:44.473-04:00Hooked. Nice job.Hooked. Nice job.TKAstlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15853167834460094772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-15756322001354359542010-04-22T15:44:45.241-04:002010-04-22T15:44:45.241-04:00Good voice. I'd read on.Good voice. I'd read on.fairchildnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-2806296800082087672010-04-22T15:32:31.355-04:002010-04-22T15:32:31.355-04:00Hooked.Hooked.rheanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-18450683213129995782010-04-22T14:57:18.206-04:002010-04-22T14:57:18.206-04:00Love it! Great start, I'm hooked. Very well do...Love it! Great start, I'm hooked. Very well done.Portiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13435815819572442582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-91343892236480660482010-04-22T14:39:34.215-04:002010-04-22T14:39:34.215-04:00Hooked. I'm especially interested because the...Hooked. I'm especially interested because the title makes me think he's going to do something terrible.Jill Wheelerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15059527254551768150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44701326938736527172010-04-22T14:02:21.007-04:002010-04-22T14:02:21.007-04:00Good opening . . . I'm hooked!Good opening . . . I'm hooked!Crystal R.http://crystalroget.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-85302759383609086242010-04-22T13:48:49.148-04:002010-04-22T13:48:49.148-04:00Hooked.Hooked.Steve Hallhttp://kestrelsaerie.usnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-90537418949096174612010-04-22T13:42:46.897-04:002010-04-22T13:42:46.897-04:00Yep, I'm hooked, too. Nice job.Yep, I'm hooked, too. Nice job.Krista Van Dolzerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08830193414560232842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-50822204125704502842010-04-22T13:33:52.091-04:002010-04-22T13:33:52.091-04:00Hooked. And I like the title.Hooked. And I like the title.Lori Lundquisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03388955247948625283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-4632199161322110032010-04-22T13:22:17.113-04:002010-04-22T13:22:17.113-04:00Good opening. Would definitely read on. Is Harvey ...Good opening. Would definitely read on. Is Harvey right or not? Gotta see.Buffy Andrewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07033283884801658206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-29539313252029843402010-04-22T12:47:19.461-04:002010-04-22T12:47:19.461-04:00Great job!Great job!Steena Holmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03585255306121495098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-79599342501038843032010-04-22T12:29:12.478-04:002010-04-22T12:29:12.478-04:00Oh my I am hooked. Great opening.Oh my I am hooked. Great opening.Kristinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13095264668972996587noreply@blogger.com