tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post7721217865817070971..comments2024-03-29T05:54:33.136-04:00Comments on Authoress: 34 Drop the NeedleAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-37536740906709415682009-12-17T02:19:05.508-05:002009-12-17T02:19:05.508-05:00I really like your voice! And I'm instantly in...I really like your voice! And I'm instantly intrigued by Rose and her abilities and total lack of fear. I definitely want to read more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-40320080144486547262009-12-16T16:38:37.182-05:002009-12-16T16:38:37.182-05:00Love this! Subtle and well written.Love this! Subtle and well written.Jodi Meadowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796496740054225283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-88426110945318972502009-12-16T14:38:39.471-05:002009-12-16T14:38:39.471-05:00Great stuff. Rose's response to the danger in...Great stuff. Rose's response to the danger intrigues me, since most people would probably be right at Uncle John's heels. (Well, I certainly would!) What is she planning on doing? And why isn't she screaming? Very interesting.<br /><br />I think it should be "stealthily" since it's modifying a verb. Otherwise the writing is pretty solid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-26059344546781632792009-12-16T10:59:06.851-05:002009-12-16T10:59:06.851-05:00Tension, Danger galore! I loved the action and the...Tension, Danger galore! I loved the action and the prickling on my arms from the oh-gawd-what-is-going-to-happen-next.<br /><br />Except for…*scuffing feet*... Might want to check out the size of barley seed. I don’t think ‘dropping’ is the correct term.<br /><br />Other than that piddling thing, I was enthralled. Good job with this submission!Huntresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-2798941555416374442009-12-16T10:55:57.547-05:002009-12-16T10:55:57.547-05:00Suspense is most effective when the mind of the re...Suspense is most effective when the mind of the reader is engaged in imagining the terror just around the corner. You have carried it out with consummate skill. Nice job!DCShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03125613995070496696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-51942199535226278072009-12-16T10:15:53.438-05:002009-12-16T10:15:53.438-05:00I love this!
The writing seems so effortless and ...I love this!<br /><br />The writing seems so effortless and flowing. It moves seamlessly from one idea to the next. There is a sense of danger, but it's subdued. I like that about it too. The writer isn't shouting the danger at me. It's very subtle.<br /><br />Very nicely written. 10 out of 10.Michaelhttp://skullhven.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com