tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post8072599140271614210..comments2024-03-28T08:14:28.881-04:00Comments on Authoress: F2S 53Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-43717139278273054072008-12-05T11:51:00.000-05:002008-12-05T11:51:00.000-05:00Found it - thanks Heather.Found it - thanks Heather.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-10664381203749919622008-12-05T10:39:00.000-05:002008-12-05T10:39:00.000-05:00I am curious.I am curious.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-54310376622407621452008-12-04T12:32:00.000-05:002008-12-04T12:32:00.000-05:00Okay, Dusty Muffin, if you insist. :) On my blog, ...Okay, Dusty Muffin, if you insist. :) <BR/><BR/>On my blog, there's a link on the right-hand side to "Go Small or Go Home". The first chapter of the book can be found at that link, and I'd love feedback!<BR/><BR/>And I'm sorry I lost you, fairchild, and thanks for the comments from several others on polishing suggestions.<BR/><BR/>HeatherHeather Wardellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07266031957030063157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-13266517594578422802008-12-04T09:54:00.000-05:002008-12-04T09:54:00.000-05:00I’d bite. At least for the next page and then deci...I’d bite. At least for the next page and then decide again from there.Anette J Kreshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15675193405511996480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-65086690164856992022008-12-04T01:44:00.000-05:002008-12-04T01:44:00.000-05:00More! More!More! More!Hakuna Mthathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12184886247441820766noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-23818870126668411982008-12-03T23:59:00.000-05:002008-12-03T23:59:00.000-05:00Interesting. I'd definitely read on.Interesting. I'd definitely read on.LoriStronginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10764202539292045963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-38311226275782289112008-12-03T23:12:00.000-05:002008-12-03T23:12:00.000-05:00Wow, cheeky character. I'm definitely intrigued an...Wow, cheeky character. I'm definitely intrigued and want to find out more.Bethlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00399849555406133310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-51335314955627831902008-12-03T21:10:00.000-05:002008-12-03T21:10:00.000-05:00I want to know where that's going! Very good.I want to know where that's going! Very good.Liana Brookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14587774916354749190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-86955725987915348622008-12-03T20:53:00.000-05:002008-12-03T20:53:00.000-05:00Uhm...maybe it's just me, but I have no idea what'...Uhm...maybe it's just me, but I have no idea what's going on.<BR/><BR/>Who is saying turn around? The MC or his/her fellow job candidate?<BR/><BR/>Why would you tell a fellow job candidate to turn around?<BR/><BR/>I'm confused. Not hooked.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-53421445346141043582008-12-03T19:10:00.000-05:002008-12-03T19:10:00.000-05:00Hooked!Hooked!Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-18322322972242165512008-12-03T17:52:00.000-05:002008-12-03T17:52:00.000-05:00Yes. This sounds strong and promising. Nice job. ;...Yes. This sounds strong and promising. Nice job. ;]Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-4104438592820982042008-12-03T15:46:00.000-05:002008-12-03T15:46:00.000-05:00I'd remove "at his surprise", or change the whole ...I'd remove "at his surprise", or change the whole phrase to "trying to surpress a smile" or something. But, really, I like it. Good job!Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13659688646243833862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-83560972859154827522008-12-03T15:36:00.000-05:002008-12-03T15:36:00.000-05:00Hooking and I'd read on.However, I do feel that "t...Hooking and I'd read on.<BR/><BR/>However, I do feel that "trying not to smile at his surprise" is very telly and meh. I'd like to see this bit polished or removed.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15772115162429818530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-41985375696199978932008-12-03T15:21:00.000-05:002008-12-03T15:21:00.000-05:00I'm intrigued. I would definitely read on.I'm intrigued. I would definitely read on.Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-58141864517399389742008-12-03T15:09:00.000-05:002008-12-03T15:09:00.000-05:00I totally want to know what happens!I totally want to know what happens!Anna Clairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08774415814789806840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-21863565823688675112008-12-03T13:34:00.000-05:002008-12-03T13:34:00.000-05:00Well done. I'm hooked!Well done. I'm hooked!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com