tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post8978023917815222730..comments2024-03-28T08:14:28.881-04:00Comments on Authoress: FAKE LOGLINE #11Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-85521402929281484752013-04-02T19:49:33.971-04:002013-04-02T19:49:33.971-04:00No. Sorry, it's not bad! It just needs more.No. Sorry, it's not bad! It just needs more.Beth Overmyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04820441246149409581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-77800169294801137112013-04-02T16:12:55.619-04:002013-04-02T16:12:55.619-04:00No. We need to know what's at stake here and a...No. We need to know what's at stake here and a hint at what goes wrong.Bonnie Staringhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15617661715759556106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-51681104843217640672013-04-02T14:15:04.672-04:002013-04-02T14:15:04.672-04:00No. No. Julia Byershttp://www.juliathewritergirl.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-79618759930001441842013-04-02T13:27:41.934-04:002013-04-02T13:27:41.934-04:00No, needs more plot.No, needs more plot.Patchihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09097638657085263738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-55650855480730275122013-04-02T12:54:02.137-04:002013-04-02T12:54:02.137-04:00No.No.tarakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11879814735940426961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-25270264636377464562013-04-02T11:46:57.149-04:002013-04-02T11:46:57.149-04:00nonoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-64457684414386043562013-04-02T10:54:49.100-04:002013-04-02T10:54:49.100-04:00nonoLisa Tiffinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03483442088851809605noreply@blogger.com