tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post1540637822934403854..comments2024-03-29T03:41:44.480-04:00Comments on Authoress: 128 YA ParanormalAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-48463503066601163632010-03-27T21:43:36.881-04:002010-03-27T21:43:36.881-04:00Right now it's a guarded hooked.
I would pref...Right now it's a guarded hooked.<br /><br />I would prefer a more wry comment such as: 'I considered this to be a problem', because it is purely subjective whether the MC's status is or isn't a problem.Cheryl Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-14031323850431740282010-03-27T12:37:21.812-04:002010-03-27T12:37:21.812-04:00Like it.Like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45588018560039621722010-03-26T21:12:10.406-04:002010-03-26T21:12:10.406-04:00I like it. Suggestion - get rid of the but and mak...I like it. Suggestion - get rid of the but and make the first sentence into two. I think this would make it strongerRebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-14422170045631365242010-03-26T16:30:28.283-04:002010-03-26T16:30:28.283-04:00Hooked.Hooked.falconesse@gmail.comhttp://falconesse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-87145565444006702392010-03-26T16:18:27.568-04:002010-03-26T16:18:27.568-04:00Hah! Yes, hooked.Hah! Yes, hooked.Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-27347383735431365502010-03-26T09:31:27.944-04:002010-03-26T09:31:27.944-04:00Got me chuckling right off the bat. Hooked.Got me chuckling right off the bat. Hooked.Bradhttp://deceptivelyrandom.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-10356317411143628482010-03-26T06:23:34.635-04:002010-03-26T06:23:34.635-04:00Hehe. Yeah, hooked.Hehe. Yeah, hooked.Jodi Meadowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796496740054225283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-57753540999671370542010-03-25T23:34:44.648-04:002010-03-25T23:34:44.648-04:00Hooked!Hooked!Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13926854472611072303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-55471536422875006052010-03-25T20:28:32.284-04:002010-03-25T20:28:32.284-04:00Hooked!Hooked!Juli Page Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17269486506169141680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-14657614008922302552010-03-25T19:29:20.283-04:002010-03-25T19:29:20.283-04:00Absolutely hooked.Absolutely hooked.Higley Brownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16031676706856541682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-34502559282032114072010-03-25T19:18:48.900-04:002010-03-25T19:18:48.900-04:00Congrats! Hooked despite cliche.Congrats! Hooked despite cliche.Sojournernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-46996525082248092842010-03-25T19:00:23.953-04:002010-03-25T19:00:23.953-04:00catchy, I'm incatchy, I'm inMeghan S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12447149254455271636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-83404148261284145652010-03-25T18:17:52.940-04:002010-03-25T18:17:52.940-04:00GRINS. I read this too fast and thought you had &q...GRINS. I read this too fast and thought you had "but I was born with a pitchfork in mine". <br /><br />I do like the first sentence and am hooked by that alone. Even if the pitchfork was in the hand instead of the mouth.Cate Kariaxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01812494549402252779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-72864478294491949672010-03-25T18:03:01.340-04:002010-03-25T18:03:01.340-04:00A little unsure with this one, though not for any ...A little unsure with this one, though not for any reason I can really speak to. I would definitely give it another paragraph or so, since I like the writer's voice.Annahttp://www.justoneanna.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-54021319124474449112010-03-25T17:58:17.132-04:002010-03-25T17:58:17.132-04:00Hooked.Hooked.Anassahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11554524219883438465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-56968249741187264822010-03-25T17:42:52.925-04:002010-03-25T17:42:52.925-04:00Hooked also! Great job!Hooked also! Great job!shawnawkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384952077525747377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-82113510720994879372010-03-25T17:06:45.112-04:002010-03-25T17:06:45.112-04:00Ouch. Hard on Mom. Moderately hooked.Ouch. Hard on Mom. Moderately hooked.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-52850950317121074452010-03-25T17:04:03.481-04:002010-03-25T17:04:03.481-04:00Love it! Hook for humor and a good, strong MC voic...Love it! Hook for humor and a good, strong MC voice.Tamihttp://tamimoore.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-61982593735697687122010-03-25T17:02:45.879-04:002010-03-25T17:02:45.879-04:00This is just my thing. Love it!This is just my thing. Love it!MHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16748209334943163314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-80912383179243481482010-03-25T16:57:40.793-04:002010-03-25T16:57:40.793-04:00Well done! I'm hooked.Well done! I'm hooked.Amy Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05083333388180804799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-80314689534662074012010-03-25T16:53:38.566-04:002010-03-25T16:53:38.566-04:00I like.I like.Joshua McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17367262185912463258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-25320120144420895262010-03-25T16:43:27.972-04:002010-03-25T16:43:27.972-04:00Hooked.Hooked.Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.com