tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post1649390742342765164..comments2024-03-29T05:54:33.136-04:00Comments on Authoress: Talkin' Heads #3Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-67033382817861653602008-09-26T16:10:00.000-04:002008-09-26T16:10:00.000-04:00Thanks very much for the comments everyone!anonymo...Thanks very much for the comments everyone!<BR/><BR/>anonymous: thanks for pointing that out.<BR/><BR/>Lori: I've tried to look for the instances you're referring to but I think I'm just too close to it. Where did you feel Gretchen switched tone?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-86391613419942294442008-09-26T00:28:00.000-04:002008-09-26T00:28:00.000-04:00It took a few lines for me to tell where the diffe...It took a few lines for me to tell where the differences in speech patterns were, but once it picked up it was quite clear and you did well with the differences. :)<BR/>Good luck,<BR/><BR/>~MercMerchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-14029978489799252372008-09-25T18:36:00.000-04:002008-09-25T18:36:00.000-04:00Benji's voice is great--innocent and real. Howeve...Benji's voice is great--innocent and real. However, I didn't feel Gretchen's dialogue resonated with me--she seemed formal at some points and informal at others without a reason for the switch.LoriStronginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10764202539292045963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-23445506050528056022008-09-25T17:24:00.000-04:002008-09-25T17:24:00.000-04:00I thought this was well done. Both dialects came ...I thought this was well done. Both dialects came through nicely.Christina Graham Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04055656554692170817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-52112469503507496442008-09-25T17:21:00.000-04:002008-09-25T17:21:00.000-04:00I didn't notice it quite at first, but once the bo...I didn't notice it quite at first, but once the boy got talking more, the speech contrast showed up nicely and complimented their other difference to show off their personalities. Works great for me.Ardythhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15379643762791779892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-70765612276564152062008-09-25T14:41:00.000-04:002008-09-25T14:41:00.000-04:00This is good, both of the characters have very nic...This is good, both of the characters have very nice and distinct voices.Kate Karyus Quinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15581176126578915929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-50694015335623512792008-09-25T14:22:00.000-04:002008-09-25T14:22:00.000-04:00At first I couldn't detect much difference but the...At first I couldn't detect much difference but then the formality of the girl and the dialect of the boy became really distinguishable. And both characters, although very different, really got my sympathy. Great job.goldchevyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16820286495352496583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-85072727912833683312008-09-25T14:11:00.000-04:002008-09-25T14:11:00.000-04:00The differentiation between characters is well don...The differentiation between characters is well done.Karen Duvallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01839711547501582977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-15080227924645054112008-09-25T14:08:00.000-04:002008-09-25T14:08:00.000-04:00Certainly a big different in speech between the tw...Certainly a big different in speech between the two characters. They have a great contrast.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-6508282492100493722008-09-25T10:46:00.000-04:002008-09-25T10:46:00.000-04:00I like this.The only thing (and it's minor) that t...I like this.<BR/><BR/>The only thing (and it's minor) that took away from it was the "It ain't nothing."<BR/><BR/>I think it should be "It ain't nuthin'."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com