tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post2715742931962814435..comments2024-03-29T03:41:44.480-04:00Comments on Authoress: 37 YA ContemporaryAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-54245773914588470152010-03-26T22:00:34.387-04:002010-03-26T22:00:34.387-04:00I like it--I'd read on.I like it--I'd read on.Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-28259029242410020942010-03-25T18:36:49.519-04:002010-03-25T18:36:49.519-04:00Hooked. Great voice.Hooked. Great voice.rheanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-86568920695311035482010-03-25T18:21:34.570-04:002010-03-25T18:21:34.570-04:00I'd read on to see why it's a pain in the ...I'd read on to see why it's a pain in the butt...Sharon K. Mayhewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07799235347319851345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-846965652854766312010-03-25T18:11:18.068-04:002010-03-25T18:11:18.068-04:00True YA protagonist. Hooked.True YA protagonist. Hooked.Sojournernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-73438865750333051372010-03-25T17:08:28.985-04:002010-03-25T17:08:28.985-04:00Hooked! I like the voice, I like the situation. I ...Hooked! I like the voice, I like the situation. I want more.Gracie Bea Wintertonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12812103053130702992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-41377978442559566662010-03-25T16:29:24.661-04:002010-03-25T16:29:24.661-04:00I like it. The first sentence had me, the second m...I like it. The first sentence had me, the second made me smile. Hooked.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13926854472611072303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-67005997241921634322010-03-25T16:16:31.430-04:002010-03-25T16:16:31.430-04:00Hooked. And I also like the title.Hooked. And I also like the title.carol Newman Croninhttp://www.carolnewmancronin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-89043409033566265522010-03-25T15:19:00.741-04:002010-03-25T15:19:00.741-04:00This made me laugh. The premise itself doesn't...This made me laugh. The premise itself doesn't grab me, but otherwise I'd be hooked.Anassahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11554524219883438465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-72991303926487362312010-03-25T15:03:27.080-04:002010-03-25T15:03:27.080-04:00Hooked! Nice ironic voice.Hooked! Nice ironic voice.Irishttp://www.irisharper.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-37866154365173009152010-03-25T14:40:26.042-04:002010-03-25T14:40:26.042-04:00Hooked. I like the narrator's bluntness.Hooked. I like the narrator's bluntness.falconessehttp://falconesse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-25419665907194490602010-03-25T14:29:05.101-04:002010-03-25T14:29:05.101-04:00Not hooked. Show her in the process of running aw...Not hooked. Show her in the process of running away, or show the thing that is the pain in the butt happening to her. Put her in the situation instead of talking about it.Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15769803733067838372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-58313676047448633472010-03-25T14:23:48.567-04:002010-03-25T14:23:48.567-04:00like the romantic idea of running away, but doesn&...like the romantic idea of running away, but doesn't go with pain in the butt (hemorrhoids) for me.<br /><br />Not hookedCarolyn Chambers Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03494503999922712440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-57938774176734897362010-03-25T13:26:34.864-04:002010-03-25T13:26:34.864-04:00Hooked. I want to read on to find out who's ru...Hooked. I want to read on to find out who's running away and why, and what pain-in-the-butt adventures it leads to.Sophianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-154936082665224602010-03-25T13:20:50.123-04:002010-03-25T13:20:50.123-04:00Hooked.Hooked.Jessica Brockmolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05333664969192588015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-51694420565376460712010-03-25T13:02:42.941-04:002010-03-25T13:02:42.941-04:00Hooked. Great title. :-)Hooked. Great title. :-)Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-33270461271551194662010-03-25T12:58:24.242-04:002010-03-25T12:58:24.242-04:00hooked. love the title also.hooked. love the title also.smrnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-75513184188083642092010-03-25T12:31:08.392-04:002010-03-25T12:31:08.392-04:00Would definitely read on. I get a good sense of, a...Would definitely read on. I get a good sense of, and like the MC already.Valerie Kemphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05795714434618357955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-21285952985449960792010-03-25T12:21:09.132-04:002010-03-25T12:21:09.132-04:00Hooked. Made me smile.Hooked. Made me smile.Kateehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03909851761164178447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-25488128500613284882010-03-25T12:15:08.608-04:002010-03-25T12:15:08.608-04:00Definitely hooked. I like the title, tooDefinitely hooked. I like the title, tooRebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-6367650706275724042010-03-25T11:53:38.675-04:002010-03-25T11:53:38.675-04:00Loved it. Agree with A.L. Sonnichsen, but am hook...Loved it. Agree with A.L. Sonnichsen, but am hooked - would read more.Chantal Kirklandhttp://eternallyconfused.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-60024295801945406882010-03-25T11:40:18.724-04:002010-03-25T11:40:18.724-04:00Hooked!!!!Hooked!!!!Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-37034555162419193562010-03-25T11:29:39.743-04:002010-03-25T11:29:39.743-04:00Make me giggle. I'd give this a little bit mor...Make me giggle. I'd give this a little bit more of my time :)Selestialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11513212631394350304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-27915234290609659772010-03-25T11:21:04.438-04:002010-03-25T11:21:04.438-04:00I like it, but I think you could do more with it. ...I like it, but I think you could do more with it. Running at night isn't a pain in the butt, unless she/he falls on her/his butt in the next sentence. It's a pain in the shins when you run into stuff you can't see and in the ankles when you twist them stepping in rabbit holes. I'd take the old cliche and play around with it a bit more. But that's, of course, jmho. :) Good luck!A.L. Sonnichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-76115342811398645802010-03-25T10:59:41.247-04:002010-03-25T10:59:41.247-04:00I love the voice. I'd read on.I love the voice. I'd read on.Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05054086165490704114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-27811850788482951572010-03-25T10:41:18.869-04:002010-03-25T10:41:18.869-04:00Heh. Hooked.Heh. Hooked.fairchildnoreply@blogger.com