tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post3790923220446807646..comments2024-03-28T02:12:56.114-04:00Comments on Authoress: 95 Chick LitAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-13278521618042475102010-03-26T21:11:36.803-04:002010-03-26T21:11:36.803-04:00Not hooked, sorry.Not hooked, sorry.Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-10536464943530970902010-03-26T14:12:37.548-04:002010-03-26T14:12:37.548-04:00ChicK Lit is a genre - Chic Lit sounds like the t...ChicK Lit is a genre - Chic Lit sounds like the title of an article in Vogue :)<br /><br />Not hooked - there's nothing happening. What makes this person's reservation being lost unique?Lucy Woodhullhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10772331811727392601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-2647518203436356622010-03-26T13:59:53.694-04:002010-03-26T13:59:53.694-04:00Not hooked - completely uninteresting.Not hooked - completely uninteresting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03503322164886391587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-14005417594286521352010-03-26T13:49:42.701-04:002010-03-26T13:49:42.701-04:00I'm not hooked either. Twenty-five words is a ...I'm not hooked either. Twenty-five words is a pretty small number to hook the reader. I'm certain it gets more hooky in the next few lines.Michaelhttp://cornelldeville.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-10301062106702645032010-03-26T09:52:45.252-04:002010-03-26T09:52:45.252-04:00Not hooked.
I think maybe we're missing som...Not hooked. <br /><br />I think maybe we're missing some information that comes in the next couple of sentences, but right now I'm a little confused: the clerk says there's no reservation in his name, and his response is to say "You'll find it under my name"? The clerk just said it's not there. Makes me think he's not really listening to her, and that'd irk me.falconesse@gmail.comhttp://falconesse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-43705731050709328692010-03-26T06:48:40.535-04:002010-03-26T06:48:40.535-04:00Not hooked.Not hooked.Jodi Meadowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796496740054225283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-29262516344044736832010-03-25T22:24:56.170-04:002010-03-25T22:24:56.170-04:00My first reaction was "Huh?" Not hooked...My first reaction was "Huh?" Not hooked.Emhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07129305433075137293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-75156595565502169222010-03-25T20:30:27.859-04:002010-03-25T20:30:27.859-04:00Not hooked. You need something solid to start with...Not hooked. You need something solid to start with. This seems like the middle of a story.Amy Sue Nathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13854920309673361956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-3405396590083732082010-03-25T20:16:51.631-04:002010-03-25T20:16:51.631-04:00You're setting up a problem (no reservation), ...You're setting up a problem (no reservation), and you start with action, so I think that's good. However, "the clerk apologized" is unnecessary. The clerk says, "I'm sorry." Cleaner to stop after "your name." Then: The clerk continued (staring at his computer screen? clicking his computer keys?).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-7161781340012456102010-03-25T18:44:19.777-04:002010-03-25T18:44:19.777-04:00Not hooked, I'm getting the "why should I...Not hooked, I'm getting the "why should I care?" feelingMeghan S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12447149254455271636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-79958573667965660892010-03-25T16:54:35.725-04:002010-03-25T16:54:35.725-04:00Not hooked, sorry. Give us a name, maybe, or a rea...Not hooked, sorry. Give us a name, maybe, or a reason why it's so important to HAVE the reservation.Gracie Bea Wintertonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12812103053130702992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-37764629008713279132010-03-25T16:50:52.183-04:002010-03-25T16:50:52.183-04:00This would be boring to experience, let alone to r...This would be boring to experience, let alone to read about.Keren Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13121027210783177857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-11752219297015467602010-03-25T16:09:52.814-04:002010-03-25T16:09:52.814-04:00Sorry, not hooked. But the closest I'll get to...Sorry, not hooked. But the closest I'll get to Chic Lit is Sigourney Weaver in ALIENS! ㋡samsevernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10913647759811350705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-59176792478533295422010-03-25T16:09:48.484-04:002010-03-25T16:09:48.484-04:00Not hooked - not enough to go on.Not hooked - not enough to go on.Joshua McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17367262185912463258noreply@blogger.com