tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post4009708780452166815..comments2024-03-28T08:14:28.881-04:00Comments on Authoress: 106 Contemporary YAAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-54380194848584450552010-03-31T18:09:16.764-04:002010-03-31T18:09:16.764-04:00Well... The first bit got me but I think the pee w...Well... The first bit got me but I think the pee was a bit TOO shocking for a first line.Lylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10828965110399028753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-87759694467232443842010-03-27T22:56:25.738-04:002010-03-27T22:56:25.738-04:00I didn't mind the pee reference at all- and pe...I didn't mind the pee reference at all- and people SHOULD pay attention to theirs. Not too long ago it was just about all doctors had to go on.<br /><br />But enough of that. I liked this and would read on. Clearly foreshadowing some disease.Cheryl Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-19096672239912089232010-03-26T21:02:57.951-04:002010-03-26T21:02:57.951-04:00Weird... the content didn't put me off, but I&...Weird... the content didn't put me off, but I'm not sure it's what I'd want right up front. Not really hooked.Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45453986114242170152010-03-26T21:02:13.259-04:002010-03-26T21:02:13.259-04:00Anonymous author, I have to tell you, I have been ...Anonymous author, I have to tell you, I have been thinking about your unusual pee opening all day. I read it to my writing partner, who laughed and loved it also. It's just like life - for something major to happen, and for a person to only realize it later... when their pee is weird :)<br /><br />Keep your unusual opening, please. It's the one out of the hundred that I remembered and thought about all day. And "Everybody Poops" is one of the best selling children's books of all time! XOLucy Woodhullhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10772331811727392601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-40967170690500228152010-03-26T18:48:21.202-04:002010-03-26T18:48:21.202-04:00Interesting. We all pee, so why exactly is this gr...Interesting. We all pee, so why exactly is this gross? I'd definitely read on.CindyLou Fosterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178779080794507708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-52709664843388911412010-03-26T16:23:35.328-04:002010-03-26T16:23:35.328-04:00I am in the clear minority here - I loved this. I...I am in the clear minority here - I loved this. It's unusual. Hooked.Lucy Woodhullhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10772331811727392601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44759247889648701302010-03-26T13:48:45.946-04:002010-03-26T13:48:45.946-04:00Not hooked. I usually have a pretty high tolerance...Not hooked. I usually have a pretty high tolerance/squick factor, but this turned me off.falconesse@gmail.comhttp://falconesse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-23523366731822249862010-03-26T12:38:18.350-04:002010-03-26T12:38:18.350-04:00Not hooked because of the whole pee thing. I'd...Not hooked because of the whole pee thing. I'd need to know more about the character first.Susan X Bradleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03933142677328722384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-91629472878249092482010-03-26T06:37:39.956-04:002010-03-26T06:37:39.956-04:00Um. Pee? I'm probably more okay with mentionin...Um. Pee? I'm probably more okay with mentioning bodily fluids than most people, but this is weird. I'm not sure I'm hooked.Jodi Meadowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796496740054225283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-41369638324186351372010-03-25T19:24:56.752-04:002010-03-25T19:24:56.752-04:00Pass!Pass!Sojournernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-39747753131182993002010-03-25T18:50:31.126-04:002010-03-25T18:50:31.126-04:00TMI, not hooked at allTMI, not hooked at allMeghan S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12447149254455271636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44094163642561895542010-03-25T17:14:16.522-04:002010-03-25T17:14:16.522-04:00Smelly pee has me making this face: :/
Wish I was...Smelly pee has me making this face: :/ <br />Wish I was hooked, because I liked it up until that point.MHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16748209334943163314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-41643953642303122982010-03-25T17:14:00.887-04:002010-03-25T17:14:00.887-04:00I agree with the above comments...the whole pee th...I agree with the above comments...the whole pee thing was a bit jarring.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00953304463413984709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-30054155778042060562010-03-25T17:09:55.783-04:002010-03-25T17:09:55.783-04:00A bit weird and off-putting, but I'd be intere...A bit weird and off-putting, but I'd be interested to see where this is going.Luc2https://www.blogger.com/profile/01069557738924277313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-91542309911842870022010-03-25T16:57:02.619-04:002010-03-25T16:57:02.619-04:00Ick. Not hooked.Ick. Not hooked.Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-68709927990275101412010-03-25T16:46:07.311-04:002010-03-25T16:46:07.311-04:00Repelled. You're taking the piss, right?Repelled. You're taking the piss, right?Keren Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13121027210783177857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-87279946488720108712010-03-25T16:29:34.764-04:002010-03-25T16:29:34.764-04:00Not hooked - a bit too weird for me.Not hooked - a bit too weird for me.Joshua McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17367262185912463258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-10346175666621809452010-03-25T16:25:30.287-04:002010-03-25T16:25:30.287-04:00Ewwww...I am grossed out in an asparagus pee fashi...Ewwww...I am grossed out in an asparagus pee fashion, yet there is a small voice in my head wondering why her pee smelled, and, dare I say, what it smelled like. Is that wrong?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-74224961259119299782010-03-25T16:24:55.071-04:002010-03-25T16:24:55.071-04:00Not hooked. I have a feeling it's about her de...Not hooked. I have a feeling it's about her dealing with a disease, so I might read further.Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.com