tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post5830885480619231724..comments2024-03-29T05:54:33.136-04:00Comments on Authoress: Drop The Needle 15Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-71573422187141800302008-08-01T17:27:00.000-04:002008-08-01T17:27:00.000-04:00Never trust a wizard with a sense of humor, I alwa...Never trust a wizard with a sense of humor, I always say. ;-)<BR/><BR/>I liked this scene snippet, and I think I got a fairly good sense of the overload's frustration. I didn't get all that well-formed an impression of Fenlay, however. He obviously has a sense of humor and feels quite secure in his position (otherwise he'd be running before the overload had him killed, right?), but other than that, I didn't get much from him. I think that's probably more due to the length of the snippet than the characterization, though.<BR/><BR/>Nice writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-69965273013147468822008-07-31T23:53:00.000-04:002008-07-31T23:53:00.000-04:00Douglas Adams would have loved your Fenley.So do I...Douglas Adams would have loved your Fenley.<BR/><BR/>So do I, as a matter of fact.<BR/><BR/>KizmetAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-74661327705761040382008-07-31T14:32:00.000-04:002008-07-31T14:32:00.000-04:00I've raed this one before, but it still makes me s...I've raed this one before, but it still makes me smile. <BR/><BR/>Fenlay has a great sense of humor! :)Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16497180479949061660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-32845090432163455222008-07-31T13:46:00.000-04:002008-07-31T13:46:00.000-04:00I enjoyed this piece. Very funny.I'm a bit distra...I enjoyed this piece. Very funny.<BR/><BR/>I'm a bit distracted by the fact that bunnies are not happy by nature. They are actually quite stupid and mean*.<BR/><BR/>But I am willing to overlook that, since the piece is so awesome.<BR/><BR/><I>*I used to work with rabbits. My boss was very selective of who could work with them, because they would attack if they detected any hesitation on the part of the handler. Many of my co-workers had scars on their hands. <BR/><BR/>It took two people to trim the rabbits' nails: one to cut the nails, and one to hold their hands over the rabbit's eyes. <BR/><BR/>Because despite how viciously the rabbit was resisting, as soon as you covered its eyes, it sat placidly. "Huh... where did those guys go?" <BR/><BR/>Not too bright, rabbits. ;)</I>H. L. Dyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11054946734073372817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-18054295445394197952008-07-30T17:37:00.000-04:002008-07-30T17:37:00.000-04:00I'm guessing Fenlay is the SC. He comes across as ...I'm guessing Fenlay is the SC. He comes across as funny - I'll admit he made me smile. At the moment, I'm not getting the impression of a rounded character, but he's certainly engaging.Esther.Jadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11552124058522436295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-65271708659089776712008-07-30T15:21:00.000-04:002008-07-30T15:21:00.000-04:00*snickers*I've read this elsewhere and still love ...*snickers*<BR/><BR/>I've read this elsewhere and still love it from start to finish. Fenlay makes an engaging and hilarious SC.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-63387075510246438972008-07-30T15:05:00.000-04:002008-07-30T15:05:00.000-04:00The two bits of this I've read (the first in the A...The two bits of this I've read (the first in the Are You Hooked contest) have me rearing to read the rest. Both characters are painted very vividly, and Fenley's personality comes across loud and clear with just a few short lines. Awesome job!LoriStronginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10764202539292045963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-63413514333564570942008-07-30T14:50:00.000-04:002008-07-30T14:50:00.000-04:00AHAHAHAHAHA! Fenlay is nicely developed (SC). He's...AHAHAHAHAHA! Fenlay is nicely developed (SC). He's got the heart of a child. LOL!Beth Overmyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04820441246149409581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-81474779545070734742008-07-30T14:16:00.000-04:002008-07-30T14:16:00.000-04:00We get into Deviran's head, so I assume he is the ...We get into Deviran's head, so I assume he is the MC. That means Fenlay is your SC. <BR/><BR/>[chuckles]<BR/><BR/>He sounds very much like an odious minion poking fun at his stressed thread thin Overlord-Wanna-Be. <BR/><BR/>Both guys show well - though I think Fenlay could have been physically described (like the sound of his voice, the look on his face, etc).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-42854293484944154952008-07-30T13:05:00.000-04:002008-07-30T13:05:00.000-04:00Fantasy spoof indeed. Great humor, and this Fenlay...Fantasy spoof indeed. Great humor, and this Fenlay is a real prankster, who is likely to die a horrible death, caused by a happy horde of pink bunnies. Really funny.Luc2https://www.blogger.com/profile/01069557738924277313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-443908644269778092008-07-30T12:47:00.000-04:002008-07-30T12:47:00.000-04:00Hehe! I still love this Fenlay character. His nonc...Hehe! I still love this Fenlay character. His nonchalant manner and jokes conveyed a lot about him.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-30742445979813565482008-07-30T12:38:00.000-04:002008-07-30T12:38:00.000-04:00I thought this was great - it made me laugh and Fe...I thought this was great - it made me laugh and Fenlay's sense of humor. Definitely got a sense of him. The only thing I didn't like was the use of the word "sniggered" - it sounds a little mean spirited to me - I'd prefer "snickered." But otherwise, IMO it's very solid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-7898149293428925752008-07-30T11:37:00.000-04:002008-07-30T11:37:00.000-04:00I'm cheating here, cos I'm reading this, so I know...I'm cheating here, cos I'm reading this, so I know who's who! Fenlay's such a joker! I love him (glad to meet him at last!). Definitely real here!Nayuleskahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08693548526829437580noreply@blogger.com