tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post6243258351712378652..comments2024-03-19T03:20:39.801-04:00Comments on Authoress: 10TH BIRTHDAY BLOGPITCH #32 YA Light FantasyAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-76155301305083334742018-03-30T18:30:53.847-04:002018-03-30T18:30:53.847-04:00Thank you so much!!! Thank you so much!!! Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-81990791860502275772018-03-30T16:44:16.320-04:002018-03-30T16:44:16.320-04:00I have no idea how I missed this on the first read...I have no idea how I missed this on the first read through of entrants.<br />However I love it. I like the tension and it's absolutely intriguing to exactly what is going to happen next!!<br />Best of luck!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05177686842708250289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-91935266895707054442018-03-30T12:51:13.573-04:002018-03-30T12:51:13.573-04:00Hi Holly! Thank you so much for the feedback and q...Hi Holly! Thank you so much for the feedback and question. Yes, this is the set up to the first plot point, where its discovered that this entire ritual is built on a lie. The rest of the novel moves forward from there once the pretty fairytale shimmer disappears and the dark underbelly is revealed.Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-48911002792485463922018-03-30T12:45:17.904-04:002018-03-30T12:45:17.904-04:00Thank you so much! I will submit today :)Thank you so much! I will submit today :)Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-85645999188352722412018-03-30T12:45:02.722-04:002018-03-30T12:45:02.722-04:00Thank you so much! I will submit today :)Thank you so much! I will submit today :)Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-52478644107337715512018-03-30T12:44:50.218-04:002018-03-30T12:44:50.218-04:00Thank you so much! I will submit today :)Thank you so much! I will submit today :)Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-77944735249009299132018-03-30T12:44:30.947-04:002018-03-30T12:44:30.947-04:00Thank you so much! Submission is sent through Quer...Thank you so much! Submission is sent through Query Manager :)Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-72449635196687430972018-03-30T12:44:13.952-04:002018-03-30T12:44:13.952-04:00Thank you so much! Submission is sent :)Thank you so much! Submission is sent :)Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-43357237472083124602018-03-30T12:35:44.678-04:002018-03-30T12:35:44.678-04:00Is this only the setup? It reads like your entire ...Is this only the setup? It reads like your entire novel is her deciding if she should jump or not, and while that is interesting, it's not much of a plot. If you're saying that she DOES jump and it's then that she realizes that she's probably going to die (because of the bones), that's great but I still want to know what happens next.<br /><br />Good luck!<br />HollyHolly Bodgerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08218140291198124199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-79204506684299728582018-03-30T11:43:43.408-04:002018-03-30T11:43:43.408-04:00I'd be happy to see a query and the first 10 p...I'd be happy to see a query and the first 10 pages of this. Please follow our submission guidelines at the Andrea Brown Literary Agency website, where you will also find my email. In the subject line, write QUERY: AUTHORESS.<br /><br />Jennifer Rofé, Andrea Brown Literary AgencyJennifer Rofehttp://www.andreabrownlit.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-71540714715588686882018-03-30T11:08:00.588-04:002018-03-30T11:08:00.588-04:00Great comps! Good luck!Great comps! Good luck!Michele Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08152126207883635685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-17796278709517882002018-03-30T08:29:26.273-04:002018-03-30T08:29:26.273-04:00Thank you so much!!! :)Thank you so much!!! :)Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45945683050652372732018-03-30T08:29:12.706-04:002018-03-30T08:29:12.706-04:00Thank you! I'm so excited to see the positive ...Thank you! I'm so excited to see the positive response!Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-39499535933351479062018-03-30T08:28:50.893-04:002018-03-30T08:28:50.893-04:00Oh thank you so much!!! :)Oh thank you so much!!! :)Loreleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12317384974973656348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-4250277655311400742018-03-29T18:51:45.400-04:002018-03-29T18:51:45.400-04:00This is a great pitch - all I want is to know more...This is a great pitch - all I want is to know more! Congrats on the requests!shertzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08224596157292793246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-59482060675994098752018-03-29T17:31:47.067-04:002018-03-29T17:31:47.067-04:00Oooh I'd love to read more. Please email your ...Oooh I'd love to read more. Please email your query + 3 chapters + synopsis to lauren@triadaus.com, and include "Birthday Blog Pitch" in the subj line. I look forward to reading!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17277435872061050126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-32396769457704706642018-03-29T16:20:32.044-04:002018-03-29T16:20:32.044-04:00Dang. This is super vivid and intense, and given h...Dang. This is super vivid and intense, and given how many requests you've already gotten, it's clear you did an awesome job. Wow.Nicole Nowotniknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-85175320166277351582018-03-29T14:59:53.596-04:002018-03-29T14:59:53.596-04:00Please send query and first 10 pages to Info@thebe...Please send query and first 10 pages to Info@thebentagency.com. Thanks!<br />Jenny Bent<br />The Bent AgencyJennybenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11699301154578890097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-74990248279124064062018-03-29T14:25:40.385-04:002018-03-29T14:25:40.385-04:00Love it! Instant tension and stakes, instantly che...Love it! Instant tension and stakes, instantly cheering for your heroine not to meet this fate. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15931930938362271431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-42003296893617642982018-03-29T12:11:34.890-04:002018-03-29T12:11:34.890-04:00Hi! I'd love too see this. Please use my query...Hi! I'd love too see this. Please use my querymanager link and put Authoress as your referral. Then I'll request from in the system! https://querymanager.com/query/QueryPamPam Phohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14190817860987781775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-10221208338570466292018-03-29T11:58:12.869-04:002018-03-29T11:58:12.869-04:00Hello,
Can you please send me your query and the f...Hello,<br />Can you please send me your query and the first 100 pages to my email below?<br />Thanks!<br />Carrie Hannigan<br />HSG Agency<br />channigan@hsgagency.comCarrie Hannigannoreply@blogger.com