tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post6258483832136820619..comments2024-03-29T05:54:33.136-04:00Comments on Authoress: Drop The Needle 12Authoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-86909312381777769292008-07-31T21:42:00.000-04:002008-07-31T21:42:00.000-04:00Nicely done.jerzegurlNicely done.<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>jerzegurlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-81415890257920503112008-07-31T14:26:00.000-04:002008-07-31T14:26:00.000-04:00Grandpa reminded me of MY papa. :) Good character!...Grandpa reminded me of MY papa. :) Good character!Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16497180479949061660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-41761994543250609052008-07-31T13:28:00.000-04:002008-07-31T13:28:00.000-04:00Yup. Grandpa works for me.Don't most grandpas hav...Yup. Grandpa works for me.<BR/><BR/>Don't most grandpas have 2 thumbs though? <I>*snort*</I>H. L. Dyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11054946734073372817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-19318923914451705852008-07-30T19:36:00.000-04:002008-07-30T19:36:00.000-04:00Grandpa is a great character. He really comes ali...Grandpa is a great character. He really comes alive--his personality shines through and his dialogue fits with how he's been described.J. Lea Lopezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127268567300257974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-1969285065113733212008-07-30T17:26:00.000-04:002008-07-30T17:26:00.000-04:00I'd say the grandfather is the SC. He comes across...I'd say the grandfather is the SC. He comes across as a lovable old man with a pet obsession.Esther.Jadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11552124058522436295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45029608652573011482008-07-30T15:09:00.000-04:002008-07-30T15:09:00.000-04:00I've read this elsewhere, and I still love it. Gra...I've read this elsewhere, and I still love it. Grandpa is a wonderful SC. His dialogue, attitude, and actions all make him rounded and engaging.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-11593987393980938642008-07-30T14:56:00.000-04:002008-07-30T14:56:00.000-04:00Definitely a good picture painted of the grandfath...Definitely a good picture painted of the grandfather and his character, plus the relationship the two of them have.<BR/><BR/>(But maybe use a stronger transition from the memory to the present scene.)LoriStronginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10764202539292045963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-30794815286686575082008-07-30T14:46:00.000-04:002008-07-30T14:46:00.000-04:00Nice. Grandpa has to be the secondary character. Y...Nice. Grandpa has to be the secondary character. You've given him some personality. Me likes!Beth Overmyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04820441246149409581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-8710859121142996612008-07-30T14:33:00.000-04:002008-07-30T14:33:00.000-04:00[laughs over the last paragraph]Grandpa is a real ...[laughs over the last paragraph]<BR/><BR/>Grandpa is a real card, isn't he. Nice job portraying him. He's nice with the right kind of edge to him. Sounds right.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-4412991494635251072008-07-30T12:38:00.000-04:002008-07-30T12:38:00.000-04:00I still love this piece. Grandpa seems well-develo...I still love this piece. Grandpa seems well-developed in just this short scene. I really get a feel for his love of life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-58847901600555526222008-07-30T12:11:00.000-04:002008-07-30T12:11:00.000-04:00I critted this elsewhere, and I still think it's v...I critted this elsewhere, and I still think it's very solid. Grandpa is very interesting and I feel like I know him.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-579180001124284642008-07-30T12:07:00.000-04:002008-07-30T12:07:00.000-04:00I mean you Nailed it. sorry,I mean you Nailed it. sorry,Luc2https://www.blogger.com/profile/01069557738924277313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-26237381395484403742008-07-30T12:01:00.000-04:002008-07-30T12:01:00.000-04:00I absolutely love this. Great show of the grandfat...I absolutely love this. Great show of the grandfather, and a really good opening by Grandma's joke. As far as the drop the needle-idea was meant (as I interpret it), you mailed it with this scene.Luc2https://www.blogger.com/profile/01069557738924277313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-23460018722616540262008-07-30T11:31:00.000-04:002008-07-30T11:31:00.000-04:00I think grandpa is the secondary character, and he...I think grandpa is the secondary character, and he is quite a character! Made me laugh :)Nayuleskahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08693548526829437580noreply@blogger.com