tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post6794929052562174787..comments2024-03-29T05:54:33.136-04:00Comments on Authoress: 10TH BIRTHDAY BLOGPITCH #7: MG FantasyAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-78683694887963691152018-03-30T11:49:13.777-04:002018-03-30T11:49:13.777-04:00I'd be happy to see a query and the first 10 p...I'd be happy to see a query and the first 10 pages of this. Please follow our submission guidelines at the Andrea Brown Literary Agency website, where you will also find my email. In the subject line, write QUERY: AUTHORESS.<br /><br />Jennifer Rofé, Andrea Brown Literary AgencyJennifer Rofehttp://www.andreabrownlit.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-12745376127753922602018-03-29T17:23:54.709-04:002018-03-29T17:23:54.709-04:00I'd love to read more. Please email your query...I'd love to read more. Please email your query + 3 chapters + synopsis to lauren@triadaus.com, and include "Birthday Blog Pitch" in the subj line. I look forward to reading!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17277435872061050126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-55237167276900339392018-03-29T15:08:23.776-04:002018-03-29T15:08:23.776-04:00Please send query and first 10 pages to Info@thebe...Please send query and first 10 pages to Info@thebentagency.com. Thanks!<br />Jenny Bent<br />The Bent AgencyJennybenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11699301154578890097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-21493557912627402322018-03-29T13:39:29.373-04:002018-03-29T13:39:29.373-04:00There is a lot here that draws my interest! I don&...There is a lot here that draws my interest! I don't think you need to include the ages--we already now it's MG. The beginning was a little off kilter for me. I feel like I need to know more about why creativity is forbidden and why anyone would go there in that case. I suggest you might start with introducing Vera and tell us why she is going to the school, then tell us how she figures out something is amiss. The unexpected elements of the curiosity shop and the fire in her belly really drew me in, though.Loretta Chefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14614456326479128984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-5613747628115394762018-03-29T13:17:49.923-04:002018-03-29T13:17:49.923-04:00I find it a little odd that you're using a Fre...I find it a little odd that you're using a French name for the school, but nothing else in this pitch is French (not even the character's name or the spelling of Objects which wouldn't have a c). I also don't like the use of "fire in her belly" as I can't tell if you mean this literally or if it's an odd use of an expression. Finally, I think we need a clearer goal here. What is she trying to accomplish in this story?<br /><br />Good luck!<br />HollyHolly Bodgerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08218140291198124199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-75699407300078625082018-03-29T11:41:42.496-04:002018-03-29T11:41:42.496-04:00Congratulations! Please email me at facelesswords(...Congratulations! Please email me at facelesswords(at)gmail.com for Joan's address.Authoresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-18183368713366175712018-03-29T11:27:53.210-04:002018-03-29T11:27:53.210-04:00Cool! I'd love to see more - Please send query...Cool! I'd love to see more - Please send query + first 3 chaps my way!Ammi-Joan Paquettenoreply@blogger.com