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Puts me in the main characters head, gives me tone and voice--everything I need to want to read on.Trish Esdenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02049667128434033805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-83480497062155306812010-06-22T16:14:32.665-04:002010-06-22T16:14:32.665-04:00Great start that shows the urban fantasy elements ...Great start that shows the urban fantasy elements right away.Bethnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-43522714268419339282010-06-22T15:53:14.410-04:002010-06-22T15:53:14.410-04:00Great start. Love the tone.Great start. Love the tone.Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08098421303237855760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-55007777919536884082010-06-22T15:39:04.961-04:002010-06-22T15:39:04.961-04:00Although I have never totalled a company car nor l...Although I have never totalled a company car nor lost the soul of a serial killer, I still feel sympathy for your MC. Good job.TKAstlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15853167834460094772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-37795676293325924612010-06-22T15:22:47.929-04:002010-06-22T15:22:47.929-04:00Loved it! My first thought was "That can'...Loved it! My first thought was "That can't be 25 words. Why didn't she give us another sentence?"Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15769803733067838372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-84769922445369677612010-06-22T13:08:37.676-04:002010-06-22T13:08:37.676-04:00Great opening. The juxtaposition of the mundane a...Great opening. The juxtaposition of the mundane and the supernatural is perfect; it sets the tone straight off.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-55812834822692227522010-06-22T12:33:16.973-04:002010-06-22T12:33:16.973-04:00very intriguing... I'm hookedvery intriguing... 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No suggestions here, I just want to see...Busy day!<br /><br />No suggestions here, I just want to see what happens next!Vincent Kalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04625863843215035035noreply@blogger.com