tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post7802353270698094052..comments2024-03-28T08:14:28.881-04:00Comments on Authoress: 102 MG FictionAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-44231680572269335402010-03-28T00:59:27.896-04:002010-03-28T00:59:27.896-04:00two week old garbage seemed a bit over the top--da...two week old garbage seemed a bit over the top--day old garbage stinks! breath on neck slows the action for me--i think of basketball as fast--he has time to think about the breath and if he does how can he be doing anything if the guy's on him that close?<br /><br />sorry, basketball is my favorite sport because it moves, this didn'tRobbinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09370900593361310765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-8543360431664746232010-03-27T23:07:57.081-04:002010-03-27T23:07:57.081-04:00Great energy here and lots of action.
HookedGreat energy here and lots of action.<br />HookedCheryl Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-2651372153284811782010-03-26T21:06:19.024-04:002010-03-26T21:06:19.024-04:00Not hooked, though I'm not a sports person. I ...Not hooked, though I'm not a sports person. I did like the first line, though. ;)Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-41733939239991235912010-03-26T06:40:28.859-04:002010-03-26T06:40:28.859-04:00Not really a sports person, so not hooked. I might...Not really a sports person, so not hooked. I might be otherwise.Jodi Meadowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796496740054225283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-30047404302891962372010-03-26T02:39:50.644-04:002010-03-26T02:39:50.644-04:00Count me as hooked. Like the simile in the first s...Count me as hooked. Like the simile in the first sentence.Karen Collumhttp://www.karencollum.com.aunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-86508866431600613772010-03-26T00:49:23.976-04:002010-03-26T00:49:23.976-04:00I'd keep reading. Great action.I'd keep reading. Great action.bfavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164661338051897220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-80302671680440521222010-03-26T00:28:11.190-04:002010-03-26T00:28:11.190-04:00I thought it was good. hooked.I thought it was good. hooked.jchaneynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-86894310981674394102010-03-25T22:27:17.170-04:002010-03-25T22:27:17.170-04:00Not hooked. The title skeeves me out. And that i...Not hooked. The title skeeves me out. And that is enough to keep me from reading. Though probably not middle grade aged kids.Emhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07129305433075137293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-45645361420502627012010-03-25T21:11:26.935-04:002010-03-25T21:11:26.935-04:00Well, the title certainly hooked me.Well, the title certainly hooked me.melody colleennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-14912263819830682822010-03-25T17:49:40.049-04:002010-03-25T17:49:40.049-04:00Hooked. Great title, voice and action.Hooked. Great title, voice and action.Sheila JGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15371582292020275894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-43889744889314567742010-03-25T17:07:22.774-04:002010-03-25T17:07:22.774-04:00Nice title. I played a lot of basketball, but I...Nice title. I played a lot of basketball, but I've never noticed someone's breath on me during a game.Luc2https://www.blogger.com/profile/01069557738924277313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-71047538315336147632010-03-25T16:58:50.887-04:002010-03-25T16:58:50.887-04:00Love, love, love the title! :-)Love, love, love the title! :-)Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-1958136599740305992010-03-25T16:24:53.253-04:002010-03-25T16:24:53.253-04:00Interesting title. As someone who's played lot...Interesting title. As someone who's played lots of basketball, I have a hard time connecting with the sensation. I've had guys guard me like an old dog on a new bone, but I've never noticed their breath on my neck. The 'block with my right, dribble' also doesn't jibe with me. <br /><br />If the defender's breathing on his neck, that means the MC's in the post, which means he's probably receiving a pass. If he's gonna dribble, it's probably gonna be after a spin move, or once hard into the lane and then throw up a hook.<br /><br />Know I'm being nit-picky as hell, but the verisimilitude didn't ring true for me... I might keep reading b/c I like basketball, but if the authenticity quotient didn't pick up for me soon, I'd probably stop.Joshua McCunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17367262185912463258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-43537543368546980842010-03-25T16:19:41.818-04:002010-03-25T16:19:41.818-04:00I came back to say I love the title of this and sa...I came back to say I love the title of this and saw someone beat me to it :)Carolyn R. Parsonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14529999558075983828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-22171278216535014502010-03-25T16:15:43.742-04:002010-03-25T16:15:43.742-04:00HOOKED!!! LOVE THE TITLE! LOVE THIS OPENING!!! ㋡HOOKED!!! LOVE THE TITLE! LOVE THIS OPENING!!! ㋡samsevernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10913647759811350705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-73755542959116845412010-03-25T16:15:19.263-04:002010-03-25T16:15:19.263-04:00Basketball...I want to know what happens...yeah, h...Basketball...I want to know what happens...yeah, hooked here :)Carolyn R. Parsonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14529999558075983828noreply@blogger.com