tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post8146857613256025063..comments2024-03-28T08:14:28.881-04:00Comments on Authoress: 130 MG HistoricalAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-89129617088300022322010-03-27T21:37:02.572-04:002010-03-27T21:37:02.572-04:00The letter format serves as a bit of an 'As yo...The letter format serves as a bit of an 'As you know, Bob.'info dump. <br /><br />The voice comes across as whiny too, which doesn't help me care for your MC.Cheryl Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-51402303128658071092010-03-26T16:17:22.823-04:002010-03-26T16:17:22.823-04:00Not hooked, sorry. It feels a bit too forced as a ...Not hooked, sorry. It feels a bit too forced as a set-up and information.Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-15137959686295162812010-03-26T06:22:39.943-04:002010-03-26T06:22:39.943-04:00Not really hooked. Sad, but not hooked. I'm so...Not really hooked. Sad, but not hooked. I'm sorry.Jodi Meadowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796496740054225283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-84373905115451836562010-03-26T00:59:59.476-04:002010-03-26T00:59:59.476-04:00I think you set up context really well but I'm...I think you set up context really well but I'm not hooked. I know it's a letter but it's "telling." Which is a point of a letter, but if I were a kid, would I care?bfavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164661338051897220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-68593004220823207972010-03-25T22:03:44.244-04:002010-03-25T22:03:44.244-04:00Hooked. Good job of showing immediately what the ...Hooked. Good job of showing immediately what the story is.MsJudynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-19351932605212149502010-03-25T21:04:45.095-04:002010-03-25T21:04:45.095-04:00Oh, yes, I'm hooked. I really like this one an...Oh, yes, I'm hooked. I really like this one and wish there had been more to read.melody colleennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-69851577285714633272010-03-25T18:51:55.679-04:002010-03-25T18:51:55.679-04:00Congrats! Hooked!Congrats! Hooked!Sojournernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-57969314830340309312010-03-25T18:49:26.315-04:002010-03-25T18:49:26.315-04:00Hooked...Hooked...Sharon K. Mayhewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07799235347319851345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-14412220414593829302010-03-25T18:14:42.015-04:002010-03-25T18:14:42.015-04:00Yes, definitely hooked.Yes, definitely hooked.Cate Kariaxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01812494549402252779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-70109858371442679532010-03-25T17:04:56.320-04:002010-03-25T17:04:56.320-04:00Not hooked. Who WOULDN'T be tired of working i...Not hooked. Who WOULDN'T be tired of working in a field picking cotton and corn and tobacco? Maybe if it started out with more description of the "tired"...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-74477590751484482442010-03-25T16:41:21.529-04:002010-03-25T16:41:21.529-04:00I'd keep reading. This made me smile.I'd keep reading. This made me smile.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05192888587472646161noreply@blogger.com