tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post9213173114783058525..comments2024-03-28T08:14:28.881-04:00Comments on Authoress: 10TH BIRTHDAY BLOGPITCH #17: SuspenseAuthoresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09223228949688667517noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-74303530992920547502018-05-01T12:59:20.859-04:002018-05-01T12:59:20.859-04:00Holy smokes. congrats on the hook and hooking inte...Holy smokes. congrats on the hook and hooking interest from lurking agents!! Nice job. I'd read more.GeeWizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06941244713771870949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-66284630662897617992018-04-02T14:02:57.685-04:002018-04-02T14:02:57.685-04:00Very intriguing, but I too am looking for a little...Very intriguing, but I too am looking for a little more detail. Good luck!Carol Croninhttp://www.carolnewmancronin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-47282434590107323332018-03-29T17:28:07.000-04:002018-03-29T17:28:07.000-04:00Oooh intriguing. Please email your query + 3 chapt...Oooh intriguing. Please email your query + 3 chapters + synopsis to lauren@triadaus.com, and include "Birthday Blog Pitch" in the subj line. I look forward to reading!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17277435872061050126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-26716072880693240302018-03-29T15:03:33.560-04:002018-03-29T15:03:33.560-04:00Please send query and first 10 pages to Info@thebe...Please send query and first 10 pages to Info@thebentagency.com. Thanks!<br />Jenny Bent<br />The Bent AgencyJennybenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11699301154578890097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-54815017987494151522018-03-29T14:03:59.615-04:002018-03-29T14:03:59.615-04:00I agree that this is good, but would prefer some m...I agree that this is good, but would prefer some motivation for the characters. Are they doing this for money? Fame? Boredom?<br /><br />Good luck!<br />HollyHolly Bodgerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08218140291198124199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-64858127807434868282018-03-29T12:57:09.178-04:002018-03-29T12:57:09.178-04:00Great job with a quick to the point pitch that cau...Great job with a quick to the point pitch that caught my attention. Good Luck!lhawleynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-20116234972242033992018-03-29T12:37:28.360-04:002018-03-29T12:37:28.360-04:00Good hook. I would like to see more.Good hook. I would like to see more.Stevenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-1770608998523077352018-03-29T11:50:21.254-04:002018-03-29T11:50:21.254-04:00I'm with the other two. This is a great concep...I'm with the other two. This is a great concept, but when it takes place will change so many plot elements that it almost doesn't work without a date. Still a great pitch!Alainahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10343957686450599547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-75535648982419604342018-03-29T11:32:47.949-04:002018-03-29T11:32:47.949-04:00I like this one. I'm hooked from one sentence....I like this one. I'm hooked from one sentence. Like Sarah, I'd like to know if this is contemporary or historical fiction. But it's a good pitch! Susannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3615675676021392217.post-53420352401648933392018-03-29T10:52:11.528-04:002018-03-29T10:52:11.528-04:00I like this one, but a date for the setting I thin...I like this one, but a date for the setting I think would help!Sarah Janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09940927153504938003noreply@blogger.com