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Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Here Come the First Sentences!

Obviously in-depth crits aren't necessary. Just let the author know whether the sentence hooked you or not--and why.

Once again, thank you to all who entered!

Here we go...

5 comments:

  1. Authoress - this was a lot of fun! Thanks very much for your hard work with this!

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  2. Yes, thanks. It was fun and informative!

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  3. Thanks for running this! It's astonishing how much useful feedback I received from posting a five-word title and a six-word sentence...!

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  4. Well...it took a little over 24 hours but I have finally commented on all 50...this was very informative and challenging!

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  5. The feedback on the entries was phenomenal, and I'm grateful for the opportunity to see my work through the eyes of so many readers. Thanks to everyone, Authoress especially. :)

    It would be really interesting to see how the authors would rewrite their opening sentences, and whether we could hook some readers who had previously voted no.

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