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Thursday, March 25, 2010

39 Superhero UF

TITLE: NORMAL
GENRE: Superhero urban fantasy


“Today’s the big day, Minerva!” I said. I could have burst into song,
but my off-key notes would have sent the cat scrambling for escape.

15 comments:

  1. Assuming Minerva is the cat, I'm totally hooked.

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  2. Intrigued a LOT by the genre, and I like cats, so I'd keep reading in the hopes of a deeper hook.

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  3. I remember this one from a while ago.

    I mostly still like this.

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  4. Not a fan of the name Minerva, and not hooked

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  5. I like the voice. I'd read on.

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  6. I'm not hooked, but I'm curious. I'd give it a bit more.

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  7. I definitely caught the voice. I'm interested if not exactly hooked. Would keep reading

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  8. I like the MC's energy. I'm hooked.

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  9. I like the voice, and I like the name Minerva - I think it's kinda fun. I don't know about totally hooked, but I'd keep reading. :-)

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  10. Okay, this will probably sound weird, but it was too bright and cheery for me. There was no indication/hint of a problem (Which I'm sure there will be, because otherwise there'd be no point in a superhero MC)

    Perhaps start closer to the problem?

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  11. Hooked. (I like the name, don't like cats. So what?)

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  12. Made me giggle--I can't sing either and it scares my dog when I do. Hooked.

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  13. I like this a lot and I'm interested in the genre. Hooked.

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  14. It made me smile--I'd read on.

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