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Thursday, October 9, 2008

F2S 37

There’s a Gratchitt in my closet and a Gnarlyss in my drawer.

I know I saw a Snoggitibog behind the bathroom door.

10 comments:

  1. Dr. Suess did this and made it rhyme.

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  2. Very reminiscent of "There's a Wocket in my Pocket."

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  3. There’s a Gratchitt in my closet and a Gnarlyss in my drawer.

    I know I saw a Snoggitibog behind the bathroom door.


    I'm confused. What are you trying to say? Too many unfamiliar words/creatures all at once. Sorry. Maybe this isn't just my kind of fiction.

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  4. Too much like "There's a Wocket in my Pocket" for my taste.

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  5. Reminds me very much of Lewis’ Jabberwocky poem, which I love! I would definitely read more to see what you’ve done in this endeavor.

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  6. Hehe, I like it. Just_me, it does rhyme! :P

    (*is friends with Just_me, not being mean*)

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  7. I love wierd words, so I loved it.

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  8. First line was good with the rhythm and fun words, but I stopped when I had a hard time pronouncing Snoggitibog.

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  9. Love it. Got hung up on Snoggitibog, which I think should be Snoggitybog to make it easier.

    Hmm, I've never heard of or read Wocket in my Pocket.

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  10. It made me think of "there's a poem in my pocket and a picture in my head" but I would read on, I liked the clever names.

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