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Wednesday, March 25, 2009

#10 1000 Words -- Redacted by author

Content redacted. You get a critting break this time. =)
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 26, 2009 at 11:41 AM

    A little terse. But I like the imagery.

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  2. AuthoressMarch 26, 2009 at 11:55 AM

    LOL!

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  3. StinaMarch 26, 2009 at 2:41 PM

    I was impressed by the stark writing. None of that overwriting that plagues so many writers.

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