Okay, here we go! We've got 50 chunks of dialogue to critique. Please note that "EMOTION" is used loosely, since it isn't always an emotion that's being conveyed.
As you critique, bear in mind the emotion or motivation stated by the author. Is the dialogue expressing it? Aside from any construction/grammatical/voice concerns, please remember that the focus of today's session is DOES THE DIALOGUE WORK.
Have fun!
Miss Snark's First Victim
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