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Thursday, March 25, 2010

23 Contemporary Romance

TITLE: Carey On
GENRE: Contemporary Romance


Jimi Hendrix had a lot of explaining to do. After all, his glowing descriptions of Ladbroke Grove were the reason Katie Scott was in London.
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20 comments:

  1. Holly BodgerMarch 25, 2010 at 9:30 AM

    I'm hooked, but I'd remove "Ladbroke Grove" as it's tough to take in three full names in two sentences.

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  2. angelareneMarch 25, 2010 at 9:40 AM

    Hooked...

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  3. S.A. HusseyMarch 25, 2010 at 9:46 AM

    It's a Fantastic story but then I'm biased I was a beta reader. Love it!

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  4. Jodi MeadowsMarch 25, 2010 at 9:51 AM

    I love the first sentence. I'd keep reading and hope the voice held up.

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  5. MomwomanMarch 25, 2010 at 9:53 AM

    Hooked.

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  6. fairchildMarch 25, 2010 at 10:12 AM

    I like the voice. I'd read on.

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  7. SelestialMarch 25, 2010 at 10:14 AM

    The first sentence grabbed me. This isn't my usual genre, but I'd keep going.

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  8. Sandy WilliamsMarch 25, 2010 at 10:17 AM

    I liked this one. Made me smile.

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  9. Kristin CelmsMarch 25, 2010 at 10:28 AM

    LOVED this opening! Totally hooked.

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  10. Cate KariaxiMarch 25, 2010 at 10:50 AM

    Yes, hooked<:

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  11. LaurieMarch 25, 2010 at 11:04 AM

    I would keep reading.

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  12. BarbaraMarch 25, 2010 at 1:08 PM

    It didn't do anything for me.
    Too many proper names in too short a space, I think.

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  13. Ash. ElizabethMarch 25, 2010 at 2:06 PM

    hooked!

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  14. AnassaMarch 25, 2010 at 3:23 PM

    I laughed at these lines. I'm hooked!

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  15. AnonymousMarch 25, 2010 at 4:18 PM

    Great hook! Has me curious...

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  16. rheaMarch 25, 2010 at 6:34 PM

    Hooked. This made me chuckle.

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  17. AislinnMarch 25, 2010 at 8:01 PM

    I'd read more.

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  18. sbjamesMarch 25, 2010 at 10:11 PM

    Ladbroke Grove is a mouthful but such a great British mouthful! Love it. Love it. I don't think I've ever seen the beginning. Woot! Seriously I'm hooked even without knowing what's coming.

    If you are worried about the 3 proper names- I say leave off Scott.

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  19. Katharina GerlachMarch 26, 2010 at 3:51 AM

    I like it - but then I love Jimmi Hendrix.

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  20. MercMarch 26, 2010 at 10:16 PM

    Almost hooked--I like the voice and would read on a bit to see what's going on.

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