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Thursday, March 29, 2018

10TH BIRTHDAY BLOGPITCH #17: Suspense

TITLE: For the Love of a Child
GENRE: Adult Suspense

Inside a small hospital in rural Louisiana, two nurses conspire to provide a famous actress with a healthy daughter — even if it isn’t her own.
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10 comments:

  1. Sarah JaneMarch 29, 2018 at 10:52 AM

    I like this one, but a date for the setting I think would help!

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  2. SusanMarch 29, 2018 at 11:32 AM

    I like this one. I'm hooked from one sentence. Like Sarah, I'd like to know if this is contemporary or historical fiction. But it's a good pitch!

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  3. AlainaMarch 29, 2018 at 11:50 AM

    I'm with the other two. This is a great concept, but when it takes place will change so many plot elements that it almost doesn't work without a date. Still a great pitch!

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  4. SteveMarch 29, 2018 at 12:37 PM

    Good hook. I would like to see more.

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  5. lhawleyMarch 29, 2018 at 12:57 PM

    Great job with a quick to the point pitch that caught my attention. Good Luck!

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  6. Holly BodgerMarch 29, 2018 at 2:03 PM

    I agree that this is good, but would prefer some motivation for the characters. Are they doing this for money? Fame? Boredom?

    Good luck!
    Holly

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  7. JennybentMarch 29, 2018 at 3:03 PM

    Please send query and first 10 pages to Info@thebentagency.com. Thanks!
    Jenny Bent
    The Bent Agency

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  8. UnknownMarch 29, 2018 at 5:28 PM

    Oooh intriguing. Please email your query + 3 chapters + synopsis to lauren@triadaus.com, and include "Birthday Blog Pitch" in the subj line. I look forward to reading!

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  9. Carol CroninApril 2, 2018 at 2:02 PM

    Very intriguing, but I too am looking for a little more detail. Good luck!

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  10. GeeWizMay 1, 2018 at 12:59 PM

    Holy smokes. congrats on the hook and hooking interest from lurking agents!! Nice job. I'd read more.

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