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Thursday, March 25, 2010

2 Christian SF

TITLE: The Tower
GENRE: Christian Sci-Fi



Tanner went through the checklist one last time. 58 minutes to go. Everything was on track.

20 comments:

  1. Yes. Hooked. I would be reading on a little more to see what this checklist was and what was going to happen in 58 minutes.

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  2. Eh. Twenty-five words is hard. For me, it might be more hooky if everything wasn't on track.

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  3. Not enough info to say 'hooked.' But I'd read a few more paras just for the genre alone.

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  4. I like SF. I'd read on.

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  5. Not completely hooked, but I would keep reading a bit further to see if it finished catching me.

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  6. Too little to say whether I'm hooked, but I'd read on a little more.

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  7. I'd read more because I like Sci-fi. But as someone else said, if things weren't on track, and there was less time, it would definitely be more interesting.

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  8. What Momwoman said.
    If I had picked this up in a bookstore, I'd definitely read more to see what's going on. There's tension there, so that keeps in.

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  9. 58 minutes until what? he went shopping for cookies? not hooked enough to keep reading. it's feels like a pull-the-rug-out trickster opener.

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  10. Not really hooked. With 58 minutes to wait, I would think he'd be going through the checklist a few more times before it was time for whatever is about to happen.

    I would read more though, but I'm afraid with almost an hour to go that I'd have to skip ahead to chapter 2 before anything really happened.

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  11. I don't think there's enough here to hook me. Sorry.

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  12. Maybe it'd be better to go into the newspaper headline mode...

    58 minutes to go. Everything was on track. Tanner knew the checklist by heart now.

    Just a suggestion.

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