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Thursday, March 25, 2010

97 YA UF

TITLE: I Was Dead Once
GENRE: YA UF


There’s always that one boy. The one who makes the girls swoon with a smirky smile pointed in their direction.

12 comments:

  1. Yes..and I love to read about him.

    hooked :)

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  2. Partial hook. I'm a sucker for a romance, and I like the hint of humor in the narrator's voice. There IS always that one boy, and he's aaaalways trouble. I'd keep reading to find out more.

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  3. I'd keep reading. So far it sounds more like telling, but I love the voice.

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  4. HOOKED BY THE TITLE!!!
    But not so much by the opening.
    I'd keep reading, based on the genre, n' the title...I'm a SUCKER for a cool title! ㋡

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  5. Way too general. I want to hear about one boy, not a generalisation. And a smirky boy is not an attractive one..

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  6. Adore the first sentence. Just love it, and I'd keep reading!

    Second sentence suggestions: The one who makes girls swoon with _____

    I don't like smirky smile (either a smirk, or a mischievous smile or *something*) and I don't like smiles *pointing* in anyone's direction.

    But I'd read on anyway :)

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  7. I have to say I dig those boys with the smirky smiles *sigh* would keep reading!

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  8. I think I'm hooked. I need to read more to know for sure, though!

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  9. Probably not hooked. I've read a lot of supernaturally hot boy and the average girls he loves stories. It's hard to stand out in that crowd.

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  10. Almost hooked, but it will have to be really unusual and snappy to stand out from too many other stories like it.

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  11. yeah there is so why would I want to read about this one?

    --sorry if that too snarky but that was my first thought

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