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Thursday, March 29, 2018

10TH BIRTHDAY BLOGPITCH #17: Suspense

TITLE: For the Love of a Child
GENRE: Adult Suspense

Inside a small hospital in rural Louisiana, two nurses conspire to provide a famous actress with a healthy daughter — even if it isn’t her own.

10 comments:

  1. I like this one, but a date for the setting I think would help!

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  2. I like this one. I'm hooked from one sentence. Like Sarah, I'd like to know if this is contemporary or historical fiction. But it's a good pitch!

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  3. I'm with the other two. This is a great concept, but when it takes place will change so many plot elements that it almost doesn't work without a date. Still a great pitch!

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  4. Good hook. I would like to see more.

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  5. Great job with a quick to the point pitch that caught my attention. Good Luck!

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  6. I agree that this is good, but would prefer some motivation for the characters. Are they doing this for money? Fame? Boredom?

    Good luck!
    Holly

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  7. Please send query and first 10 pages to Info@thebentagency.com. Thanks!
    Jenny Bent
    The Bent Agency

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  8. Oooh intriguing. Please email your query + 3 chapters + synopsis to lauren@triadaus.com, and include "Birthday Blog Pitch" in the subj line. I look forward to reading!

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  9. Very intriguing, but I too am looking for a little more detail. Good luck!

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  10. Holy smokes. congrats on the hook and hooking interest from lurking agents!! Nice job. I'd read more.

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