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Thursday, March 25, 2010

107 Post-Apocalyptic Fantasy

TITLE: Unnamed
GENRE: Post-apocalyptic Fantasy


The first time I saw a Cursed, I’d just turned fourteen. The elders kept us inside the caves most the time, but that day, I could feel the beckoning of the sun.
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14 comments:

  1. TamiMarch 25, 2010 at 4:25 PM

    Hooked. I'd keep reading to find out more.

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  2. ValerieMarch 25, 2010 at 4:46 PM

    Hooked!

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  3. AnassaMarch 25, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    Hooked. Definitely want to know what's going on.

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  4. JaneMarch 25, 2010 at 8:12 PM

    Hooked.

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  5. JimMarch 25, 2010 at 10:11 PM

    Hooked!

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  6. AnonymousMarch 26, 2010 at 2:19 AM

    but that day, the sun beckoned me... Saves you four words.

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  7. Jodi MeadowsMarch 26, 2010 at 6:36 AM

    I'd read more to see what happened. I think I'm hooked.

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  8. BradMarch 26, 2010 at 9:13 AM

    Hooked

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  9. Deb SMarch 26, 2010 at 9:25 AM

    Hooked.

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  10. feywriterMarch 26, 2010 at 2:48 PM

    I like this. Sets the scene, curious about what a Cursed is. Hooked.

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  11. UnknownMarch 26, 2010 at 4:34 PM

    Interesting... I'd read on.

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  12. MercMarch 26, 2010 at 9:01 PM

    Almost hooked--I love post-apoc and I'm intrigued what a Cursed is, but something feels a bit too stiff about the voice to pull me in completely. I'd read on a bit to find out what's going on, though.

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  13. AnonymousMarch 27, 2010 at 10:52 PM

    Nicely done. I'd read on.

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  14. BronMarch 30, 2010 at 8:13 AM

    Should it be 'most of the time'? I felt like you missed a word there. But I'd read on, if only to find out what a cursed is. I'm imagining a person in dirty hooded robes with sores on them...

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