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Thursday, June 28, 2012

Baby Slushpile: How to Comment

20 queries await your eager eyes!

When leaving your comments, please keep the following in mind:

  • Pretend you are an agent.  Say YES or NO as to whether the query hooks you, and briefly explain your answer.
  • Please DO NOT LINE EDIT or give detailed critique.  Clear but broad suggestions are most helpful, such as "too many characters mentioned" or "no real hook" or "hard to follow."
  • Pointing out the positive is helpful, too!
  • As always, be honest yet tactful.
Have fun!  I will announce my winners later today (I'm still debating!!)
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5 comments:

  1. VicorvaJune 28, 2012 at 10:30 AM

    Okay, think like an agent, think like an agent *puts agent hat on*

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