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Tuesday, April 2, 2013

FAKE LOGLINE #38

TITLE: Authoress the Rescuer
GENRE: Action/Adventure

Calm and collected Authoress needs to save authors' work from the evil and calculating Bot. It snatches up entries, swallowing them deep into the confines of cyberspace. The Authoress must rescue entries in time for the big reveal to the angelic Secret Agent.

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15 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 9:00 AM

    No.

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  2. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 10:12 AM

    No.

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  3. Lisa TiffinApril 2, 2013 at 10:41 AM

    no

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  4. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 11:16 AM

    No.
    (Wish I was allowed to vote maybe.)

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  5. tarakApril 2, 2013 at 11:23 AM

    No, although I'm with birdinabowler. It's more of a maybe than a no. What happens if the entries aren't rescued?

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  6. Julia ByersApril 2, 2013 at 1:49 PM

    No.

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  7. DianneApril 2, 2013 at 1:56 PM

    No.

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  8. SMKraftyApril 2, 2013 at 2:24 PM

    No- close but awkward.

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  9. BrigidApril 2, 2013 at 2:32 PM

    Yes. It's a bit flat, but it's also concise and clear.

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  10. Petre PanApril 2, 2013 at 2:34 PM

    Yes, haha, because it has to do with the actual stuff that goes on, and it's funny! If you up'ed the stakes a bit...

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  11. Claudia CVApril 2, 2013 at 2:54 PM

    Yes. It needs more pizzazz but it´s clear and it´s tight and it´s what a logline should be.

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  12. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 2:55 PM

    yes

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  13. Bonnie StaringApril 2, 2013 at 2:59 PM

    No. The stakes need to be higher.

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  14. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 3:12 PM

    Yes :)

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  15. Sarah FaulknerApril 2, 2013 at 7:52 PM

    No. It's not a big enough problem for a novel.

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