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Tuesday, April 2, 2013

FAKE LOGLINE #39

TITLE: The Anonymous Comment
GENRE: Adventure

After uncovering missives in her spam comments, Authoress is thrust into a hunt across the blogosphere for a mysterious commenter with a NYC House publishing deal up their sleeves. But is correct use of you’re and your, avoidance of passive sentences, and Mr. A, her tight-wearing sidekick, enough for Authoress to circumnavigate comment forums, misplaced modifiers, and the dreaded WordPress?

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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    No. There are very cute elements here but as a whole it doesn't work as a logline.

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  2. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 11:15 AM

    yes

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  3. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 11:20 AM

    No.

    I don't dislike this one, but I just feel like there are a lot of these loglines with exactly the same "plot"!

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  4. PatchiApril 2, 2013 at 12:55 PM

    No. The second line is too confusing.

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  5. Julia ByersApril 2, 2013 at 1:49 PM

    No. I love a lot about this, but there's just too much going on for me.

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  6. DianneApril 2, 2013 at 1:54 PM

    No

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  7. Sarah FloydApril 2, 2013 at 2:00 PM

    Yes. You won my vote with "Mr. A, her tight-wearing sidekick." So funny!

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  8. SMKraftyApril 2, 2013 at 2:23 PM

    No- confusing

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  9. Petre PanApril 2, 2013 at 2:33 PM

    No, I don't get the stakes. Sorry = (

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  10. Claudia CVApril 2, 2013 at 2:52 PM

    No. it´s cute but it needs more work for it be a story.

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  11. The Kranky CrowApril 2, 2013 at 7:10 PM

    no...but it's close!

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  12. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 7:53 PM

    Yes.

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  13. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 11:59 PM

    Yes..come on guys, this is great.

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