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Tuesday, April 2, 2013

FAKE LOGLINE #44

TITLE: Steamy Hot
GENRE: Steampunk Romantic Comedy

Against the wishes of her Victorian family, Authoress constructs a coterie of clockwork minions to assist in her grand plan of opening a love-match steamnetwork. But a business rival kidnaps her silent partner (and secret love) Mr. A in a bid to shut down her now-thriving business. Can Authoress and her clockwork minions rescue Mr. A before it’s too late?

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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 10:15 AM

    Yes. Cute.

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  2. Lisa TiffinApril 2, 2013 at 10:39 AM

    yes

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  3. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 11:11 AM

    YES!

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  4. tarakApril 2, 2013 at 11:15 AM

    Yes. I was on the fence about "before it's too late?" ending. But the cozy mystery/steam punk angle won me over.

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  5. AnonymousApril 2, 2013 at 11:40 AM

    Yes.

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  6. PatchiApril 2, 2013 at 12:50 PM

    No, but I liked the bit about Mr.A

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  7. AilsaApril 2, 2013 at 1:10 PM

    Yes.

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  8. Julia ByersApril 2, 2013 at 1:44 PM

    No. This one's really close for me, though.

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  9. DianneApril 2, 2013 at 1:48 PM

    Yes. Love the genre, too.

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  10. SMKraftyApril 2, 2013 at 2:16 PM

    Yes

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  11. Petre PanApril 2, 2013 at 2:19 PM

    No...I felt like there needed to be more stuff to do with writing, or with something blog-ish. I don't think I'd read about a love-match steamnetwork. But I loved the Mr. A mention!!!

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  12. Claudia CVApril 2, 2013 at 2:46 PM

    No. Cute and funny, but i think it needs more work on focusing on the story.

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  13. Bonnie StaringApril 2, 2013 at 2:48 PM

    YES

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  14. Sarah FaulknerApril 2, 2013 at 7:57 PM

    Yes! Love the genera pick. :)

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  15. StephscoApril 2, 2013 at 10:23 PM

    Yes!

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  16. JeanneApril 2, 2013 at 11:44 PM

    Yes!

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  17. SEspanaApril 3, 2013 at 1:18 AM

    No.

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