Round One Logline Critique

Okay, here come the loglines!

IMPORTANT:  If yours is one of the 40 entries, please be kind enough to take the time to critique a minimum of 10 other entries.  (Yes, 10.  Loglines are short.)

Remember, loglines aren't the same as full-out pitches.  Some of today's entries fall outside the logline parameters and will need some guidance in cutting their words down to the snappy, just-the-basics information a logline needs.  Which is the whole point of this exercise.

Have fun!  Definitely some cool premises out there.

(Know what's cool?  I never have to remind you to be kind.  Because you always are.)