Logline Critique Round Two #2

TITLE: Ultraviolet Catastrophe
GENRE: YA Sci-Fi

Lexie’s first assignment as a student at prestigious Quantum Technologies leads her to uncover a mistake in the master equation for an Einstein-Rosen bridge - a wormhole. But when the lead scientist turns up as a popsicle in the cryo chamber, Lexie discovers it wasn’t a mistake - someone’s eliminating scientists. And if she doesn’t stop them, her classmates will be next.

Logline Critique Round Two #1

TITLE: Sylvan Legacy
GENRE: Historical romance with paranormal elements

A half-elven debutante in Regency era London must hide her abilities from not only potential suitors but an ancient brotherhood who feeds on magic. When she is forced to heal another debutante during a riding accident, with the man she loves as a witness, her mistake jeopardizes not only their relationship but her life if she is caught by the brotherhood.

Winners for Logline Critique Round Two

Winning numbers have been drawn for Logline Critique Round Two and the owners have all been emailed their entry numbers.

If you didn't get an email, I'm sorry; that means your ticket number wasn't selected.

Here is the complete list, so you may double check:

• MJ2IFXA2 as ENTRY #1


• 51E4YUYG as ENTRY #2


• GDI62S1L as ENTRY #3


• C8SK05QI as ENTRY #4


• K4M40MO2 as ENTRY #5


• IP86KUW2 as ENTRY #6


• 3WKUZIV0 as ENTRY #7


• Z1R9MXU1 as ENTRY #8


• RUQ627T5 as ENTRY #9


• HCFY0U4N as ENTRY #10


• 642XX905 as ENTRY #11


• HPHWM1WS as ENTRY #12


• E8F5GK7T as ENTRY #13


• H0NIOL02 as ENTRY #14


• SJMWDS9E as ENTRY #15


• RGI3FPLR as ENTRY #16


• SZNBH0SK as ENTRY #17


• DGYHAFPO as ENTRY #18


• S5519VN9 as ENTRY #19


• 2SCTHG3X as ENTRY #20


• 6MMRUB2Y as ENTRY #21


• 7RC9GZGT as ENTRY #22


• 4OR1ULE3 as ENTRY #23


• S9Y4OWO1 as ENTRY #24


• 6Y7UQIBA as ENTRY #25


• 25K5IORA as ENTRY #26


• 37AV9E1K as ENTRY #27


• EKNO8W4S as ENTRY #28


• YJETJKO4 as ENTRY #29


• C3XAW7GS as ENTRY #30


• KUH6JWHV as ENTRY #31


• XH9XHCDI as ENTRY #32


• M80MMKVB as ENTRY #33


• 79KGQW5F as ENTRY #34


• RJOD4U9O as ENTRY #35


• G5GR92KN as ENTRY #36


• A4CC4S3O as ENTRY #37


• SHFL2B67 as ENTRY #38


• 650CBKXU as ENTRY #39


• 7IFNJRKE as ENTRY #40

The alternates are:

• 68PD0I91 as ENTRY #ALT-1

Authoress's Favorite Photo of the Year

I love this photo more than words can say!  Alice Loweecey, one of our MSFV Success Story authors, hunted Josh down this weekend at Bouchercon, for the sole purpose of getting this picture taken.

If this isn't made of 50 shades of awesome, nothing is!  Thank you, Alice, for hooking up with my beloved agent at what is clearly his favorite event of the year.  I may have to make this my desktop picture.  (No, really.  I'm totally dorky like that.)

Submission Guidelines for Logline Critique Round Two

PLEASE NOTE:

If yours was one of the 40 entries in Round One, please do not enter this round!  Remember that you have until tomorrow to submit your revised logline to Adam Heine for critique on his blog this Friday.


SUBMISSION GUIDELINES:

The submission window will be open from 9 am to 5 pm EDT TODAY.  This is a lottery, which means the bot will randomly choose 40 entries at the close of the window.  These entries will post on Tuesday, October 9, for critique.

WEB FORM SUBMISSIONS (preferred/easiest method):

GO HERE.  Please remember to proofread before hitting "submit".


EMAIL SUBMISSIONS:

As always, send your submission to authoress.submissions(at)gmail.com.  Format as follows:

SCREEN NAME: (type it here)
TITLE: (type it here)
GENRE: (type it here)

(type your 75-word logline here)