Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Logline Critique Round 1 #5

TITLE: Dragon Bait
GENRE: YA Fantasy

Moura Pearce isn’t going to let Senator Darius McCarthy get away with declaring her father a traitor on national television and ruining her life, but if she’s caught plotting against him, McCarthy’s dragons will eat her alive. DRAGON BAIT is set in an alternate 1950's powered by dragon magic.




Logline Critique Round 1 #4

TITLE: Charleston
GENRE: Historical fantasy

A twenty-two-year-old nymph must rescue her beloved sister from a four-thousand-year-old warrior while risk losing the human man she loves.

Logline Critique Round 1 #3

TITLE: Satellite Hearts
GENRE: YA Sci-Fi Thriller

Sixteen-year-old Zahra Mbali is a programmable human: she can’t love, cry or remember stuff. Her only purpose is to kill. Until Zahra serves that purpose, she cannot die. But she’s programmed by her father to explode. She only has 21 days until she detonates to find out why.

Logline Critique Round 1 #2

TITLE: The Crimson 5 and the Golden Light Bulb
GENRE: Middle Grade Contemporary

When spunky Kara Krumpet travels to Camp Piedmont with 6th graders from all over the country to create an object more original than air purification sparkles or rotating bunk beds, someone tries to sabotage her team’s project. If Kara can’t work with her teammates to stop them before competition day, she’ll never get into Piedmont Academy, and she’ll be forced to study one subject like Math for two whole years, and her best ideas will shrivel up for good.

Logline Critique Round 1 #1

TITLE: Edge of Life
GENRE: YA Romance with Magical Realism

After recovering from a coma Pippa Knightly finds a boy from her dreams becoming reality and questions her own sanity. Particularly when she discovers he was murdered.

Pippa investigates finding Joshua has returned from Magna, a plain for those who have suffered untimely death to hunt for his killer. Pippa helps him and they fall in love, but this comes at a price, one Pippa has to decide if she is prepared to pay.