Miss Snark's First Victim
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No, needs more plot.
No. We need to know what's at stake here and a hint at what goes wrong.
No. Sorry, it's not bad! It just needs more.
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ReplyDeleteNo, needs more plot.
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ReplyDeleteNo. We need to know what's at stake here and a hint at what goes wrong.
ReplyDeleteNo. Sorry, it's not bad! It just needs more.
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